Great White Shark

stay away from the water deep, our great white shark thinks i'm nice n sweet, the terror of the deep n wide, perhaps relate to suicide, on the west coast the widows weep, around ol Perth swift death does sweep, to just be bit in halves, by a monster shark that starves, great monster of the deep... re: 'On the Ocean Waves' Russell Sivey Don Been a few lives taken lately Jaws is out here...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/13/2012 3:53:00 PM
I love shark,,,, which is on this week ;} a man was out with his fifteen yr old son, his son said " Dad what would you do if we seen a shark" the dad said there is no sharks out here. Then something hit his leg, then his other leg. He somehow kicked it in the right spot on the nose. I seen him on the 4am fox news show. Both of his legs from knees to ankles were bandaged up!
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Date: 8/4/2012 3:14:00 PM
Ahh yes Don but there'll flakes of revenge ingested by many.. L O L.) well bitten old mate.
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Date: 7/29/2012 6:43:00 PM
They are killers and the way you wrote it was in depth itself. Nice work Bubby. I like Robert's remarks on your ballad.
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Date: 7/29/2012 6:18:00 PM
Great write, Don. If I ever get to visit Australia, I'll be sure to stay out of the water! Don't like the idea of being a shark's dinner. LOL
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Date: 7/29/2012 5:50:00 PM
Foster's Brewery Ltd. has been airing television commercials in the USA for a few years. Each one begins with "How to Speak Australian". One of the ads depicts a great white shark and refers to it as a "guppy". Good one Don.
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