Great Grandma's Ghost

She came back like she said she would.
Great grandma was not a typical ghost
She was a kindred spirit guiding for good
Just when we needed her the most

She saved a life by invading a dream
Until uncle was woke and went to search
How she did it from beyond a mystery
Like a bible story from church

She insisted that he get the baby 
That she was very ill and could die
Even though he thought it crazy
He took action from his bedside

Across town baby was found
A deaf mute she was you see
Also brown so hospital around
Took her straight to surgery

The infant child's appendix burst
And her sleeping family didn’t know
What pain the babe must have hurt
That grandma’s ghost came and told.

Now this story is true that I tell you
But there is no fear on my face
For this ghost was grandma so true
Full of love joy and grace a ghost with lace.





*This really happened in my family in Charlotte, NC and the babe who was saved has the scar from surgery till this day. The then colored hospital site was Good Samaritan Hospital. Now it is the site for the Carolina Panther Football Stadium. Great grannie’s name is Mary McGee and she was seen by another aunt as a bright light playing peek a boo as that aunt was then a tot. McGee had always told her kids she would visit one day beyond her grave. I am Mary McGee's great granddaughter.		





10/16/2021 WRITTEN FOR GHOST LACE CONTEST
SPONSOR  Chantelle Ann Cook
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 9/24/2023 11:56:00 AM
Thank you for the poem. My grandmother also visited at the moment she died. I saw her as her composite but not her features. She said goodbye.
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Karen Jones
Date: 9/24/2023 12:06:00 PM
Wow thanks for sharing this! Did you too write about it? Thanks for reading.
Date: 10/17/2021 5:55:00 PM
Wow Karen this is a remarkable story....and you have penned it beautifully. You must feel quite proud to know your great grandmother's spirit is so strong...she must have been a wonderful person. Blessings, Paulette
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/17/2021 6:02:00 PM
I know her through stories as she was passed on when I was born. But she was a strong praying God fearing woman who was no nonsense. She inspired my book FAITH MOUNTAIN which is no longer in print but will be again. I am proud of her and strive to make her proud. Thanks for reading and the kind comments!
Date: 10/17/2021 8:50:00 AM
That is a captivating story, Karen, even more so when considering it is a true one. Regards // paul
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/17/2021 8:58:00 AM
Thanks for reading and your kind comment Paul. hugs
Date: 10/17/2021 6:22:00 AM
What a great story. That’s my kind of ghost. I feel bad for people who do not believe in anything. Hugs Rick.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 10/17/2021 11:23:00 AM
I hope you post the photo and details on wikitree.com (a free site) to benefit others! Aloha! Rico
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/17/2021 6:46:00 AM
Thanks Rick. The photo original is too fragile but somewhere in one of my old computer towers lies the scan of her her mom who was a slave and a cousin. Will try to locate and share. Thanks for your interest!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/17/2021 6:23:00 AM
It would be cool to see a photo of her. ;0)
Date: 10/16/2021 9:56:00 PM
Wow, chills!! I hope the Lord lets me watch over my kids and grandbabies....and great grandbabies when I am on the other side. I will be busy-busy- BUSY!!! I have a lot of kids and grandkids. I love them all so much!! I am excited by your sweet grandma story, love it! I'm glad you are ok, what a beautiful legacy <3
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/17/2021 1:33:00 AM
Wow so honored you fav it. Yes the love she has is so strong the lord allowed her to watch over us. I think your love will be just as strong being the deep poetic type. Perhaps your kids will not be as needy as we are lol. Great Grandma surely shakes her head and is too busy but made a way anyway. I have a 1800s photo of her. Maybe one day I will post it. Thanks for helping me honor her.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 10/16/2021 9:57:00 PM
By the way, this is in my favorites!!
Date: 10/16/2021 3:50:00 PM
wow, what an amazing story Thanks for sharing, Karen!
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/16/2021 4:38:00 PM
Thanks for that means a lot Andrea
Date: 10/16/2021 3:45:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Karen. Thanks for reminding us of the story in an exquisite write.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/16/2021 3:49:00 PM
So happy you took time to read it. Thanks Lasaad!
Date: 10/16/2021 3:07:00 PM
I do believe in ghosts, especially family ones and old attachments die hard. I trust this is all true, thank you for retelling the story, I have much faith in these words, :)
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/16/2021 3:11:00 PM
Thanks so much Mystic Rose Rose it is true.
Date: 10/16/2021 11:40:00 AM
Please don't go looking for her anytime soon!
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/16/2021 11:43:00 AM
Lol. I won't.
Date: 10/16/2021 5:04:00 AM
For God everything is possible. Loved your poem.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/16/2021 6:47:00 AM
Amen. Appreciate that!
Date: 10/16/2021 3:16:00 AM
Hi Karen I enjoyed this poem about your great grandmas ghost. Miracles happen! Debx
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/16/2021 6:47:00 AM
Yes they really do! And thanks Deb.
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