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Great Fujiyama

Great Fujiyama
Mountain peak of my country
Forever bless us

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Debbie Guzzi

February 4, 2011 at 2:00 PM

I've never been here have you? Do you think you could give me aa animal limerick? I hope so ;) Light 7 Love

Andrea Dietrich

January 29, 2011 at 5:00 PM

You are in Japan?? A great "peek" your feelings!

Carolyn Devonshire

January 29, 2011 at 3:04 PM

You allow us to picture the mountain in all its glory, Robert, and I love the last line. Indeed, I hope we are all forever blessed. Wonderful haiku, my friend. Love, Carolyn

James Tate

January 29, 2011 at 2:21 PM

Robert, good job. You have reminded me of the great mountain there in Japan. I could see it from my hotel window in Tokyo in the 1950. Many years later I bought a Fuji bicycle which still runs good. You asked about my poem Eve of Purple Leaves. I had no concious pattern from which to write it. If it is somewhat similar to something else written I am not aware. Thanks for dropping by for a read.