Great Expectations

Strolling along through Gumgulli Park
where shadows of trees made it quite dark.
Absorbing birdsong filling the air,
taking in beauty with barely a care.

Some people were out walking their dog,
others were passing me out on a jog.
Quite a few kids were kicking a ball,
and noisy miners were having a brawl.

And there on a seat alone in the park
I saw the figure of one Basil Clarke,
sitting alone and just staring ahead
with a look so forlorn and nothing said.

So I thought it best to comfort the man. 
I sat beside Basil to help how I can.
The first question I asked to ease the bumps -
“How come you’re looking down in the dumps?”

Basil declared that on three weeks ago,
an uncle died that he barely did know,
but in uncle’s will it opened his eyes,
for ten thousand dollars was a surprise.

I gave my condolence for Basil’s loss,
even though I’m sure he don’t give a toss,
so I wished him well for his good luck,
but Basil’s reply left me dumbstruck.

“I’m just getting started” Basil bemoaned,
“Just two weeks ago I was telephoned;
a cousin I barely knew curled up his toes.
His twenty thousand helped with my woes.”

You must have been over the moon I said.
Basil shrugged and just nodded his head.
I was slightly shocked at Basils’ reaction -
his depression was just gaining traction.

“And just last week my grandpa passed away,
and they read out his will in the usual way.
I got one hundred grand from the old coot”
and all of a sudden Basil went mute.

I was quietly shocked with Basil now numb,
so I asked Basil why he’s looking glum,
and Basil’s response had a horrible ring,
“Well this week there is nothing – not a thing!”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 11/14/2020 3:02:00 PM
To be that cold and expectant, sadly the vultures are never far away. Emilia : )
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/20/2020 9:40:00 PM
Hello Emilia ... my word the vultures are out there, and they have no scruples at all. Expectations are a sad reflection of many - thank you Emilia - Lindsay
Date: 11/7/2020 5:47:00 AM
A shopaholic, or a gambler, or put it into savings for 15 to 20 years for a child or grandchild, or maybe his wife withdrew it all and went shopping! A few possibilities for our Basil. The first two he has only himself to blame, the third option, he should have left some for himself. the last, he will have to handle with care! Great write Lindsay, hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/7/2020 4:42:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... Basil was seated on the gravy train of expectation. To be a relative of his I don't think I'd let him cook my dinner or pour me a drink, especially if I won a lottery - thanks once again Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 11/5/2020 6:25:00 PM
Basil sure is 'The Guy,' eh?! -- Or maybe he's thinking about the how much he should put in his will for some lucky recipient... Thanks, Lindsay
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/7/2020 4:37:00 PM
G'day Gershon ... Basil comes across as one of the Entitled Generation. When it's his time he'll want to take his fortune with him - thank you Gershon - Lindsay
Date: 11/1/2020 12:11:00 PM
Hello Rico Leffanta, he was waiting for something to happen and disappointed when nothing happened.Enjoy your day my friend.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/7/2020 4:34:00 PM
Hello Darlene ... waiting for relatives to die is really ghoulish I believe but by crikey, plenty do and like Basil, can't believe they're not in the will - thank you Darlene - Lindsay
Date: 11/1/2020 10:28:00 AM
COVID-19 really did a number on Melbourne, so Basil should be delighted that is now under control and he can go out and SPEND! Thanks for the laugh! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 11/7/2020 4:30:00 PM
G'day Rico ... nine days now without a single covid case in the state of Victoria, so Basil will be looking up personal notices for will readings I reckon - catch you soon Rico - Lindsay
Date: 11/1/2020 1:19:00 AM
Lol sounds like the male version of my sister! Hugs Jan xx
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 11/7/2020 4:25:00 PM
Hello Jan ... perhaps I could have used your sister's name if I guessed right. The vultures do turn up at the reading don't they - thank you Jan; pleased you enjoyed - Lindsay
Date: 10/31/2020 6:26:00 PM
Lindsay, Truly comical “Well this week there is nothing – not a thing!”.. Great Expectations made me think of Dickens tale. Happy Halloween! -Richard
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Date: 11/7/2020 4:23:00 PM
Hello Richard ... where there's a will, there often is a family feud. I did think of C Dickens title too, and perhaps should not have used it but, the expectations were there. Greed doesn't make us happy does it - thanks Richard - Lindsay
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