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Great Escape

Gravitational pull like quicksand, her ebony eyes Ripping into his outer space. He tugs at his collar, Eking out the empty space of honeysuckle perfume. Avant-garde arrest of his indeterminate heart - Time like scented petals pauses — a prop Entertaining the thought, the mockery of bachelorhood Sought for too many years. Scented petals fall like snow, Captivating the soul — love at first sight, can it be? “Ariel! O Ariel!” I tunnel my way to find out your name. People like me rarely jettison to the Milky Way. Eagerly he made quick the great escape and married her. 1/15/2020

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Date: 1/27/2020 5:20:00 AM
A happy ending ...Avantgarde arrest in full flight.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2020 6:38:00 AM
For sure! :)
Date: 1/19/2020 1:28:00 PM
here is one I had not seen. Very clever way you did the theme and I see congrauations are in order!! Congrats and thanks for my win in your contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2020 2:55:00 PM
You’re welcome! And thank you!
Date: 1/18/2020 7:45:00 PM
Kim, love this entertaining story of smitten love. Terrific write and win. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2020 7:50:00 PM
Thank you, Cecilia!
Date: 1/17/2020 4:12:00 PM
This made me smile. "mockery of bachelorhood Sought for too many years. " Congratulations on your win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2020 7:50:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!
Date: 1/15/2020 11:28:00 PM
I was wondering how you end the poem.. And it ends beautifully.. Congrats on your win..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2020 7:50:00 PM
Thank you, Jenish!
Date: 1/15/2020 7:05:00 PM
love this creative little tale of romance... congratulations on your win :) hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2020 8:10:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 1/15/2020 6:22:00 PM
love the theme you took Kim, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2020 8:09:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! xx Kim
Date: 1/15/2020 4:53:00 PM
Your acrostic is fantastic Kim! It is so unique and whimsical! Congratulations on your podium win! xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2020 8:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie! xx Kim
Date: 1/15/2020 2:50:00 PM
A superb write Kim--well deserving of the podium win it received. Congrats!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2020 8:08:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 1/15/2020 2:36:00 PM
Very beautiful entry Kim, congrats on a nice win, and thanks for entering, you never disappoint!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2020 2:42:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 1/15/2020 11:10:00 AM
Absolutely enchanting Kim. Will you be entering this in the contest? If so, best wishes my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2020 11:33:00 AM
I did...last entry. Thank you, my friend!

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