Great Escape

Gorging on the splendour of your body slowly waking,
recalling your silhouette in the midnight hour.
Embers of twilight’s essence softly envelope me,
as the morning sun kisses with a gossamer plea,
tempting the senses to compete; real life or heaven’s retreat?

Evading life’s burdens with you by my side –
society’s nibbles, sworn enemies, and snides –
calmness prevails, forgetting all that’s acidic
and I’m utterly absorbed by your enthralling aura,
perpetuating pleasure no mortal could ever stop.
Every second of you, divine, great beloved of mine.


14th January 2020
Great Escape Contest sponsored by John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 5/22/2025 1:47:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 11/7/2020 6:38:00 AM
Hey have you really escaped? Hope you are well.. long time no see..
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Date: 7/13/2020 11:14:00 PM
Interesting write. As I read it initially it seemed a passionate, well written yet simple love poem, but, after rereading it several times, a spirituality comes through and changes my perception to one of fealty to a divine being. Enjoyed the read MA.
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Date: 2/17/2020 4:49:00 PM
You are an escape artist. A lovely piece. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/16/2020 11:23:00 AM
Love ‘gossamer plea!’ Used to go for early morning walks into the green fields in India and that’s what you see! Great Work! Midnight!
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Date: 1/28/2020 7:45:00 AM
Beautiful write, MA :)
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Date: 1/15/2020 11:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win for this wonderful poem..
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Date: 1/15/2020 3:27:00 PM
Hey there, congrats on your placement in the contest. I knew this one was magical.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 1/15/2020 3:56:00 PM
That's very kind, Chris. Thank you :)
Date: 1/15/2020 3:11:00 PM
A lovely winning acrostic MA. Congratulations on being awarded second place! ; )
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 1/15/2020 3:19:00 PM
Thank you very much Connie :)
Date: 1/15/2020 2:09:00 PM
What a beautiful write MA, you are certainly at the top of your art with this one, congrats on a great win! Thanks for entering!
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 1/15/2020 3:18:00 PM
Thanks John...I'm off restricting myself again with acrostics both ways. No more...lol...think I'll give the natural way ago now... Thanks for the challenge and the win. These contests are a good way to get you thinking in ways you wouldn't usually...
Date: 1/14/2020 2:43:00 PM
Wow, this was beautiful. Almost dream-like as I became lost in your words today. Such a soft alluring piece. So nice to see something new from you. Best wishes in the contest.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 1/14/2020 4:51:00 PM
Thanks Chris. Best wishes to you too, although you don't need them... lol :)
Date: 1/14/2020 12:52:00 PM
Sounds like some guy....we all need someone who helps to make us feel safe... Nice idea for the contest..
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 1/14/2020 12:57:00 PM
Is there any greater feeling...thanks.
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