Great Escape

Grand aspirations simmer
Releasing cherished dreams
Escape the inner sanctum
And spread their wings
To roam vast open skies
 
Each fantasy launched
Stretches into infinity at large
Candid hopes and reverie
Anticipate their new tomorrows
Pairings of freedom and success
Emerge as offspring of the heart



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on January 13, 2020 for contest GREAT ESCAPE sponsored by JOHN HAMILTON  -  RANKED 3RD
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Marcum Wong Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 4:55 PM
Your entry is one of my favorites in this contest Line. Splendidly created! Congratulations on your podium win! xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 4:59 PM
Thank you so much, Connie. Most appreciated.
Hamilton Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 2:38 PM
This is a very interesting write Line, it amazes me how one prompt can bring out such a variety of ideas, and yours is a special write. Congrats and thanks for entering!
Gauthier Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 3:27 PM
Thank you so much, John. Enjoyed your contest.
Kiser Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 5:46 AM
I love this, had to "fav"; good luck in the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 3:27 PM
Thank you for the lovely compliment, ML.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 5:44 PM
This is a winning poem Line.
Gauthier Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 9:51 PM
Thanks for the compliment, Caren. Much appreciated.
Somadas Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 7:33 AM
Beautifully done.. One of the best I read.. Good luck in the contest..
Gauthier Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 8:42 AM
Thanks, Jenish. Much appreciated.
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