Great Escape

Gone under the gripping waves of squally sea of sorrow
Remains of the castle I built with silver sands of dream,
Emerging out of the debris I face the plateau of life fallow.
Aspirations die hard, so I grow wings to fly on sunbeam
Through silver-lined clouds to sanguine summit of success.

Enthralled, I enter golden nest someone built for my access,
Soon it morphs into a cage where I can’t spread my wings,
Confined in stifling ambition, freedom lost, I forget to sing.
As air serenades the spring tune that doesn’t reach me,
Provoked, I break open the golden cage, set my soul free, 
Escape the prison to fly once again in the sky of ecstasy.

January 13, 2020
Contest : Any Acrostic of 10 to 12 lines
Sponsor : Line Gauthier
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Somadas Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 11:56 PM
Poetry at its best..One of my fav... Great win..
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 3:06 PM
I enjoyed your soul’s escape to freedom Subimal. Congratulations on your wonderful Second placement! xxoo
Hamilton Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 2:05 PM
This is another great write Subimal, congrats on a fine podium finish in my contest, thanks for entering!
Ruwindi Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 11:34 PM
Wow! This is really nice. Wonderful imagery. Good luck for the contest.
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