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Great Escape

Gone under the gripping waves of squally sea of sorrow Remains of the castle I built with silver sands of dream, Emerging out of the debris I face the plateau of life fallow. Aspirations die hard, so I grow wings to fly on sunbeam Through silver-lined clouds to sanguine summit of success. Enthralled, I enter golden nest someone built for my access, Soon it morphs into a cage where I can’t spread my wings, Confined in stifling ambition, freedom lost, I forget to sing. As air serenades the spring tune that doesn’t reach me, Provoked, I break open the golden cage, set my soul free, Escape the prison to fly once again in the sky of ecstasy. January 13, 2020 Contest : Any Acrostic of 10 to 12 lines Sponsor : Line Gauthier

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Date: 1/15/2020 11:56:00 PM
Poetry at its best..One of my fav... Great win..
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Date: 1/15/2020 3:06:00 PM
I enjoyed your soul’s escape to freedom Subimal. Congratulations on your wonderful Second placement! xxoo
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Date: 1/15/2020 2:05:00 PM
This is another great write Subimal, congrats on a fine podium finish in my contest, thanks for entering!
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Date: 1/14/2020 11:34:00 PM
Wow! This is really nice. Wonderful imagery. Good luck for the contest.
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