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Great Escape

Great was the escape, you need to hear Riding on the blade of death, oh dear Eerie and scary too, from my rear An attack on me, it was so near. Tried to swallow me, he a frogster Emerged from the leaves, was a monster Silent as death behind a piper Craving to catch him, came a viper. And that greedy frog, I failed to understand Prayed by the snake, yet on his mouth he wished Eagerly to catch me and to relish, his last supper! Won fifth place in Great escape Poetry Contest sponsored by John Hamilton

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Date: 4/2/2020 8:11:00 AM
A rather good one. I like the way of telling stories in poems, I tried this in my poem “In My Dream”. Congratulations on your win.Rashi
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 4/2/2020 9:56:00 AM
Thank you.. I will sure try to read your poem..
Date: 1/16/2020 10:20:00 AM
Congrats, nice that you've taken this some place different to the other entries I've seen so far
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/16/2020 10:59:00 AM
Thank you Nick for having your time and comment..
Date: 1/16/2020 7:17:00 AM
Enjoyed the nice poem. Congrats to win. Hugs.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/16/2020 7:38:00 AM
Thank you for your time to read and comment..
Date: 1/16/2020 7:11:00 AM
Back with congrats Jenish on your win.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/16/2020 7:37:00 AM
Thank you..
Date: 1/15/2020 5:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Jenish! ; )
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/15/2020 11:13:00 PM
Thank you Connie..
Date: 1/15/2020 2:51:00 PM
Now this is a fun write, thanks Jenish for entering, and congrats on placing!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/15/2020 11:12:00 PM
Thank you John for organizing this wonderful contest and placing me in it ...
Date: 1/14/2020 11:22:00 PM
Oh--good one, Jenish! Janice
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/14/2020 11:25:00 PM
Thank you Janice..
Date: 1/14/2020 3:43:00 AM
WOW was saved by the skeen of his...teeth! Perfect harmony of picture and poem dearest, Jenish!
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/14/2020 12:08:00 PM
Thank you Demetrios..
Date: 1/13/2020 9:12:00 AM
Great poem Jenish, The pic. tells a story all on its own! Good luck in the contest. Jennifer.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/13/2020 9:26:00 PM
I think without the pic my poem seems incomplete... Anyway thank you Jennifer..
Date: 1/13/2020 7:11:00 AM
The photo says it all and so does your poem--indeed a great escape. All the best, Jenish.
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Jenish Somadas
Date: 1/13/2020 7:17:00 AM
Yeah.. Without it some confusion may arise.. Thank you for you kind words..

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