Great Escape

Great was the escape, you need to hear
Riding on the blade of death, oh dear
Eerie and scary too, from my rear
An attack on me, it was so near.

Tried to swallow me, he a frogster
Emerged from the leaves, was a monster
Silent as death behind a piper
Craving to catch him, came a viper.

And that greedy frog, I failed to understand
Prayed by the snake, yet on his mouth he wished 
Eagerly to catch me and to relish, his last supper!



Won fifth place in Great escape Poetry Contest sponsored by John Hamilton
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Soni Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 8:11 AM
A rather good one. I like the way of telling stories in poems, I tried this in my poem “In My Dream”. Congratulations on your win.Rashi
Somadas Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 9:56 AM
Thank you.. I will sure try to read your poem..
Bagnall Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 10:20 AM
Congrats, nice that you've taken this some place different to the other entries I've seen so far
Somadas Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 10:59 AM
Thank you Nick for having your time and comment..
Dutta Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 7:17 AM
Enjoyed the nice poem. Congrats to win. Hugs.
Somadas Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 7:38 AM
Thank you for your time to read and comment..
Pandit Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 7:11 AM
Back with congrats Jenish on your win.
Somadas Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 7:37 AM
Thank you..
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 5:12 PM
Congratulations on your win Jenish! ; )
Somadas Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 11:13 PM
Thank you Connie..
Hamilton Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 2:51 PM
Now this is a fun write, thanks Jenish for entering, and congrats on placing!
Somadas Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 11:12 PM
Thank you John for organizing this wonderful contest and placing me in it ...
Canerdy Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 11:22 PM
Oh--good one, Jenish! Janice
Somadas Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 11:25 PM
Thank you Janice..
Trifiatis Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 3:43 AM
WOW was saved by the skeen of his...teeth! Perfect harmony of picture and poem dearest, Jenish!
Somadas Avatar
January 14, 2020 at 12:08 PM
Thank you Demetrios..
Proxenos Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 9:12 AM
Great poem Jenish, The pic. tells a story all on its own! Good luck in the contest. Jennifer.
Somadas Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 9:26 PM
I think without the pic my poem seems incomplete... Anyway thank you Jennifer..
Pandit Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 7:11 AM
The photo says it all and so does your poem--indeed a great escape. All the best, Jenish.
Somadas Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 7:17 AM
Yeah.. Without it some confusion may arise.. Thank you for you kind words..
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