Great Escape

Gathering buckets and spades the children laugh
Running back and forwards to the car, arms full
Each trip stacking more "important" beach equipment in the boot
All packed, I go inside to lock the house up
The door swings open again, someone needs the bathroom

Eventually we pull away and head into the early weekend traffic
Stopping briefly at our favourite sandwich shop for snacks and supplies
Can you please stop tapping on the window, silence for 15 seconds
An hour later I park the car, children cascade onto the pavement
Packing their stuff as best I can we walk down to the shore and play
Ensconced on the beach until high tide chases us home


10th January 2020
Contest : Great Escape
Sponsored by:  John Hamilton
Joint 4th
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Rigoler Avatar
January 18, 2020 at 9:49 AM
This brought back memories of my boy days and times at the beach. Many thanks for stopping by to read one of many poems about my dog. Best to yoy n your writing endeavors, and congratulations on you win. /M
Somadas Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 11:23 PM
Delightful to read.. Congrats on your win for this wonderful poem Nick..
Hamilton Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 2:44 PM
What a nice write Nick, congrats on a fine placement in my contest, thanks for entering!
Bagnall Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 10:16 AM
Thank you
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