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Great Escape

Gorgeous gracious gardens gaping
Riveting running rivers racing
Echoing effervescing enamoring endless
Adoring Angels accepting attendance
Towering tranquilising trees tremendous

Eloquent equilibrium euphoric exile
Surrendering silence sustaining smile
Comfortably calming content consciousness
Attracting  acoustical ambiance autonomous
Pleasurable pensive pondering paradise
Exuberant ethereal eyes entice





Jan.08.2020
Great escape Poetry
Sponsored by: John Hamilton

Placed 3'rd...Thank You
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Somadas Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 11:30 PM
Congrats on your win for this wonderful poem..
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 4:50 PM
Congratulations on your podium win WW! xxoo
Hamilton Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 2:35 PM
This is an amazing explosion of alliteration my my what a vocab you have dear poet, congrats on a nice win WW and thanks for entering!
Nicole Avatar
January 13, 2020 at 9:42 PM
Ahhh yes, here we go again my Warrior with Wonderful Wings. Soaring through time and space. I think I will let you lead the way. :) This is beautiful, uplifting and magical, all at the same time. :) Brandy
Harris Avatar
January 12, 2020 at 11:11 AM
Like the word play on this one. The view of something nice.
Adams Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 9:48 PM
nicely done WW... John loves alliteration so this should do well in the contest... clever penning :) hugs
White Avatar
January 10, 2020 at 4:58 PM
This gives me a vision of an extraordinary waterfall on a beautiful tropical island isolated and a warm pool surrounded with gorgeous flowers and nudity is allowed of course lol. Good luck WW. Kelli
Duncan Avatar
January 9, 2020 at 12:05 AM
Nice words and even nicer to listen to. Happy New Year :-)
Roper Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 8:35 PM
Nicely done, ^WW^, not only acrostic , but tautogram wonderful creation. Good luck in the contest.
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 4:25 PM
This poem is heavenly John. I love it! I hope to see it a top winner in the contest! New year blessings my friend. xxoo
There Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 2:34 PM
You describe, what seems to me, the heaven you see in the eyes of the one you love. Exceptional, ^WW^, and this great escape is so well-depicted...
Watt Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 12:51 PM
WW, am I detecting a theme of heaven in this great escape acrostic? Alliterative, nicely rhymed, evocative; well done, friend! ~ John
Chiri Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 12:04 PM
You still amaze me with the beauty you write my dear bro bro! I did not see this contest but I haven't been on of late but reads like a winner! Love ya bro bro!;)
Sands Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 10:29 AM
Wow, another amazing poem WW! I love this! A FAV :)
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