Joseph Osita Poet Dodoitsu

Grazing Stallion

Dark-colored prince in his 
prime
Strolls amidst summer 
heralds
As he masticates
Thrill takes me away


His streamline hairs curve 
downward
As they drench in 
nature's touch
Sharp dark eyes dart in 
degrees
Amidst green grasses  


 For Carol Brown's 
contest: ‘A horse story’

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Ingibo Benson July 30, 2011 at 6:11 PM Hi Osita, another lovely piece, picturesque and sublime. Well done!

Andrea Dietrich July 29, 2011 at 10:14 AM joseph, I can find no more poems of yours I have not commented to already. So I just came b ack to this lovely one that I really like. HOpe you create more and more beatiful ones like this. Luv, Andrea

John Freeman June 28, 2011 at 1:40 PM Joseph, Cool to see a great poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich June 23, 2011 at 8:25 PM I liked the nice picture you create with this little poem, Joseph. Congratulations on your win.

Ralph Taylor June 23, 2011 at 4:42 PM Congrats on your win, Joe. Excellent piece. Great job. Ralph

Dr.Ram Mehta June 23, 2011 at 1:43 PM My congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Joseph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 23, 2011 at 12:53 PM Congrats Joseph on your excellent win in the horse contest with this exciting entry luv.. Stallions are my very favs .. so strong and regal ..

Carol Sunshine Brown June 23, 2011 at 12:24 PM Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Joseph. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown June 9, 2011 at 10:35 AM Congratulations on a well deserved win in poet Destroyer's "Best Pet Or Animal Poem" contest Joseph. Love, Carol

Skat A June 4, 2011 at 1:02 PM great job in contest Luv*Skat

Dr.Ram Mehta June 4, 2011 at 10:15 AM Congratulations on this win to you in the contest of p.d., Joseph

Carolyn Devonshire June 4, 2011 at 9:15 AM Horses are such beautiful animals, Joseph, and you describe this one so well. Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 4, 2011 at 8:23 AM Congrats Joseph on another awesome win for another awesome write and entry into the contest luv.. enjoy..wow..

Cory Long June 4, 2011 at 6:21 AM congrats on this exceptional win. cory

Nette Onclaud June 4, 2011 at 4:12 AM how vivid can this get and what great use of the form, joseph!! winning;s best to you.. i likey this ! :) huggggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich June 3, 2011 at 10:00 PM ooooh, that last part, very cool to picture in the green grasses! Great entry.

Troy Jeremy Nelson June 3, 2011 at 8:24 AM well done, i tweeted this (Mediapope)