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Graying Darkness Awakes the Night

Graying darkness awakes the night; 
       Nimbus reflecting restless sea. 
          Beyond implausible horizon sight.

   Graying darkness awakes the night 
      Unattainable utmost breadth height, 
         Reaching out to the world for thee.

   Graying darkness awakes the night
      Nimbus reflecting restless sea.


10/25/2020

N/A was given in "COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(33)" on 10/26/2020  

HM's and NA's October 2020 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 5:18 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my HM's and NA's October 2020 Challenge with this excellent poem, great image _Constance
Ashley Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 10:26 AM
Eve, your vivid imagery is so emotive and evocative. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Constance's contest.. ~Susan
Watt Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 11:23 AM
Gorgeous image and poetic imagery, Eve. This triolet is so lovely in depicting the sea and clouds at end of day. Congratulations on your first place win. Hugs ~ John
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 5:32 PM
so evocative, Eve. Great picture you put with it too.
Kendrick Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 7:21 AM
Enjoyed reading your work today. Very descriptive of the photo. Sara
Crabtree Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 1:13 PM
A beautiful poetic form, Eve. Your words and picture match perfectly. :)
One Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 7:23 AM
Vivid imagery in triolet my friend...
Buhagiar Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 12:07 AM
A lovely triolet. Did you enter it for the contest? ~~
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