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Gray Sins 9

There once was a man named Gray
He loves drinks on a tray
He was very drunk
And hit a big trunk
He could not even pray

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Paula Goldsmith

September 29, 2026 at 9:32 AM

I enjoyed reading. No drinking/driving. Have a fun day writing away...........

Alison A Smith

September 29, 2026 at 4:11 AM

A brisk, neatly rhymed limerick with a darkly comic slide from casual drinking to consequence. The clipped, traditional form gives Gray’s misadventure an effective sense of inevitability.🍻

Abdullah Alhemaidy

September 29, 2026 at 4:18 AM

Wonderful comment! Best wishes & regards :-)

Ink Empress

September 29, 2026 at 3:35 AM

Thats so sad He needs help and empathy I wish him healing Very well written rhymes Sendin you light always ~

Abdullah Alhemaidy

September 29, 2026 at 4:21 AM

Help is always positive thing. However, he stubborn; and rebellious addicted liar! Have a wonderful day!

Arthur Vaso

September 29, 2026 at 2:53 AM

I am not a fan of the changes here, and cant follow some of the changes. I guess I am old fashioned.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

September 29, 2026 at 4:26 AM

Thank you Mr. Vaso! Old fashion is not bad at all. I love old fashioned wise good persons :-) Have a nice day! I have some problems with submitting comments!