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Not satisfied with who you see, the mirrored image lies to thee~ Compared in thought your mind projects, sifts and strains, retains, rejects~ Computerized and digitized original sin is realized~ Guilt creeps in and steals from you, your child’s eyes and faith so true~ Wondrous world of innocence, dies in right and wrong’s defense~ Purpose lost, you cling and hold, reshape your clay to fit the mold~ No longer satisfied with you, seek what you deem is right and true~ Your mind projects divinity, and buries your humanity~ Imprisoned in a fortress strong, gray and dim your child’s song~ Color and light, all but gone and death becomes your wishful dawn~ Copyright © Satprem 2012

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Date: 4/8/2015 1:38:00 PM
Hello Mark, once again :):), Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
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Date: 4/6/2015 6:40:00 PM
Yes, I noticed you are one of the newest. I bet it's a delight to be on that list. When I first joined the soup, we did not have that feature :(. I like checking what is new on this site... Have a nice time, writing more like this poem above, it was truly deep and ended in a way, that made me say WOW... come on you know that endings Unique. "death Becomes your wishful dawn." Hugs.. Linda
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Mark Roske
Date: 4/6/2015 8:42:00 PM
I am flattered and somewhat flabbergasted~ :-) I truly write for the joy of it and the payoff is how it makes myself and others feel.. humbly grateful for the honor~ :-)
Date: 4/5/2015 9:26:00 PM
Mark :) Congratulations!! <3 you are one of the poetry soups Top and Hottest Poet, -this month. I hope you enjoyed Your Easter Weekend PLUS, Your name on the featured page of the ~Best New Poet~ Enjoy the coming week. Love LINDA
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Mark Roske
Date: 4/6/2015 10:13:00 AM
Oh My My~! Thank you Linda~!!! I am so very Grateful to have this wonderful and auspicious honor bestowed upon me~! Wow, I just joined a few days ago and this just inspires me to write more~ BeWell~ :-)
Date: 4/5/2015 11:43:00 AM
Excellent! This poem sings true value. This is a mirror image of,????????? WRITE ON! Mark Roske
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Mark Roske
Date: 4/6/2015 10:14:00 AM
Thank you Larry~ Much Appreciated~ :-)

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