Gravity Fed

Sewers possess a beauty all their own belching gas, you can hear them hiss and groan. A maze that stretches for hundreds of miles: they remove our stench and leave us with smiles. Such an efficient waste removal tube: if you don’t admire their worth, you're a rube. They're the bowels of a modern city: not to acknowledge them is a pity. Interconnected pipes flush out each house and provide homes for a rat, or a mouse. A marvel of septic engineering: they spread good health without interfering. Thanks to manholes and ubiquitous drains, our paved streets are not flooded when it rains. Sewer systems are an essential tool to remove liquid waste and smelly stool. Try to imagine life without this web of underground rivers that flow and ebb. They outpace a highly prized thoroughbred and the trick is, they're gravity fed.
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Allison Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 1:16 PM
what a fabulous original take on the overlooked beauty theme, many congrats on your win Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 1:21 PM
Thank you so much Jan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Canerdy Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 2:01 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! GOOD one! Janice
Pinet Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 2:18 PM
Thanks Janice, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 11:16 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 8:03 AM
Thanks Line, your support is so appreciated my friend, Emile.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 1:13 AM
I thought "not real sewers" but then I noticed that you even made them sound wonderful! You are such a terrific wordsmith! And an idealist with a heart. You appreciate the sewers, and the photo is lovely too. Wow! Stop the presses and throw down the mike, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 8:18 AM
Thank you Caren, your thoughtful comments are always a treat my friend, Emile
Rodrigues Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 2:24 PM
The ugliness we don’t want to talk about but in a sense has a beauty all its own! Nicely done, my friend!
Pinet Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 4:46 PM
Thank you so much Kim, it's a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.
Michael Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 12:33 PM
This is different...educational too...Nice write Emile
Pinet Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 12:58 PM
Thanks Arturo, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Watson Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 12:24 PM
What a marvellously original angle to take, Emile. It makes us see anew something we so readily take for granted! Very clever! ( I may be mistaken but did you mean to write 'bowels' and 'incite'?)
Pinet Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 12:57 PM
Thanks Wendy, your support is so appreciated my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 11:10 AM
An interesting take on the challenge, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 12:56 PM
Thanks Line, I think you like it my friend, Emile.
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