Gravity Brevity
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Gravity Brevity
If brevity matters, dreams race swift than nightmares to catchup,
No muck and mire, no festering around, nothing to patch up,
A soloist than an orchestra, focus on one than all,
Critiques take a high note to second guess, a rise from a fall,
To explode in verse, implode to a terse form, worst or better,
A full platter, gluttonous matter, honey from hive, sweeter.
2019 September 29
*1st Place*
Brevity Poetry Contest No More Than Six Lines
~~Caren Krutsinger
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2019
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