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Gravity Brevity

Gravity Brevity If brevity matters, dreams race swift than nightmares to catchup, No muck and mire, no festering around, nothing to patch up, A soloist than an orchestra, focus on one than all, Critiques take a high note to second guess, a rise from a fall, To explode in verse, implode to a terse form, worst or better, A full platter, gluttonous matter, honey from hive, sweeter. 2019 September 29 *1st Place* Brevity Poetry Contest No More Than Six Lines ~~Caren Krutsinger
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Chiri Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 4:04 PM
Congrats on your win!;)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 6, 2020 at 4:22 PM
Thanks Brenda!
Mcintosh Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations on your win. Blessings
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 8:22 AM
Amen to that ~ Aloha always William
La France Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 5:01 PM
William congratulations on your win in the contest with this interesting poem !
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 5:52 PM
Thanks for sharing Constance! ~ Aloha always William
Drowley Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 3:46 PM
'William, Congratulations on your first place win! David'
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 4:24 PM
Thank you for your reading and sharing ~ Aloha always William
Canerdy Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 12:41 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved trophy win, William! Janice
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 4:23 PM
Thanks, for your visit and comment ~ Aloha always William
Chiri Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 12:12 PM
Congrats once again on your win!;)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 1:08 PM
My friend, with extended courtesies! ~ Aloha always William
Dutta Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 11:43 AM
WONDERFUL. EXCELLENT RHYTHM. NICEST CHOICE OF WORDS. BIG CONGRATS TO WIN TOP. Blessing
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 1:07 PM
My appreciative gratitude indeed! ~ Aloha always William
Godwin Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 8:42 PM
What a fun to poem to read aloud for its 'sounds' 'pop' in the mouth to bring one into the poem. A joyous reading experience, William. Good luck in the contest and all else. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 9:46 PM
I am appreciative to your welcomed comment ~ Aloha always William
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