Gravity

Gravitational force
Gets us to fall down, but
Gives our earth the way to
Go orbiting the sun,
Growth seasons result, and
Gyrates also the moon, 
Generating the tides.

For contest Pleiades G
Sponsored by Kim Merryman
November 30, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gauthier Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 8:44 AM
Love it. Well done, Agnes.
Bateman Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 5:29 AM
Hello Agnes, I really enjoyed this Gravity verse from 2016. Very intriguing here for sure. Best Wishes, Gary
Krampe Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 4:14 PM
thanks for visiting this oldie.
Merryman Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 9:13 PM
Agnes, an interesting topic that you described so well. Smooth flowing lines! Congrats on your placement! Blessings, Kim
Krampe Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 9:49 PM
Thank you very much, Kim - I am so glad you liked it.
Leiser Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 8:29 PM
Great Pleiades, Agnes! Congrats on your win :)
Krampe Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 9:50 PM
Thanks, Laura.
Callus Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 8:26 AM
This is a good thematic choice, Agnes...a topic close to your heart; should pull the sponsor's attention:) Regards // paul
Krampe Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 9:50 PM
Thanks, Paul.
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 3:31 AM
- A great Pleiades, Agnes - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Krampe Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise.
Canerdy Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 9:11 PM
Interesting topic choice for the contest--a 7, Agnes. Janice
Krampe Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 8:29 AM
Thank you, Janice. I'm a physicist, so maybe that explains the topic choice ;)
Allison Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 7:35 AM
I'd have guessed with the physics theme that this one would be yours Agnes:-):-) great write:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
Krampe Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 11:55 AM
You know me so well, Jan ;) thanks!
Capitano Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 7:30 AM
Good one Agnes and good luck in the contest.
Krampe Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 11:55 AM
Thank you, Phil.
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