Gravity

Gravity
Real force spinning
A weight on my knees
Veritable science nonfiction
In a moment the apple fell, Newton noticed
Trusted source of orbiting satellite's permanence
Youth's nemesis
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Aaron Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 1:32 PM
That last line...perfection. A great poem.
Culverhouse Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 5:35 AM
Thank you!
A  Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 1:06 PM
So, I'm just here enjoying. Awesome force to keep on ground. Lol
Culverhouse Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 5:36 AM
Thank you. have a good week. 8-]
A  Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 1:05 PM
Like Joe. On the bottom I thought I'd look you up. Miss seeing the first faces who supported me long ago ...
Maverick Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 6:27 AM
Hello Doris, I just thought to look you up I had the idea you were not posting.. I see you are however..' I think this is both a fun and true write of you're observations..'
Thomas Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 12:40 PM
nice one :)
Culverhouse Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 5:37 AM
thank you.8-]
Kendrick Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 5:56 AM
Interesting work..I had not noticed that you had been back on then I saw that your Avatar had changed..Youth's nemesis gravity.In the full force of its nemesis right now for it has me plastered to the chair..LOL..Mom
Culverhouse Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 7:33 PM
funny one mom. me too.
Amadore Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 6:27 PM
An interesting and well done acrostic...
Culverhouse Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 5:36 AM
thank you! 8-]
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