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Gravity

Celestials' envy, Earth's seraphic gravity, Revolving in love ! Written on 24/5/14 Haiku - 5/7/5 Contest - Picture this # 1 Sponsor- SKAT- A

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John Michaels

Date: 7/10/2014 5:08:00 AM

Great imagery. Nice work!

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/9/2014 8:57:00 PM

Ooh that is a happy one :) glad to see you on the list, you are good :)

Mark J. Halliday

Date: 7/9/2014 3:11:00 AM

Romantic, nicely done. Congrats.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/8/2014 11:26:00 PM

Dr Upma, nice win..PD

Joseph May

Date: 7/8/2014 10:04:00 PM

I love this one...Congrats on the win

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/8/2014 8:55:00 PM

Congrats on a beautiful win, Upma my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

Faye Gibson

Date: 7/8/2014 5:58:00 PM

Very beautiful, Upma...I like it very much. Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2014 4:01:00 PM

awww, this one had been a favorite of mine. Wish it got higher on the list. Anyway, it was nice to see it again.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/8/2014 9:51:00 AM

Excellent haiku, Upma...one of the best that I have read so far. Congrats on a fine win. // paul

James Fraser

Date: 7/8/2014 9:41:00 AM

And that they do Upma, revolve in love, as one can't be without the other. Fine take on the contest, many congratulations, James.......

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/8/2014 12:45:00 AM

Very thoughtful write, Dr. Upma. congrats on the win

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/8/2014 2:01:00 AM

Thnx Dr Ram

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/8/2014 12:22:00 AM

Hi Dr. Upma, congratulations on a beautiful win! Well-deserved!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/8/2014 12:23:00 AM

Thnx Pandita ! Appreciate ur visit n lovely comments!

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2014 9:18:00 PM

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/8/2014 12:08:00 AM

Thanks for lovely wishes n continued support ever my dear friend !

Jake Ponce

Date: 5/25/2014 2:26:00 AM

The theme of this haiku is the middle ground of/missing link between the others I've read for the same contest. Good luck!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/26/2014 8:04:00 AM

Thnx for wishes Jake !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2014 12:14:00 AM

this is one of the most beautiful gravity haiku I have seen in the contest!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 5/26/2014 8:03:00 AM

Thanks Andrea ! Too much an encouragement !