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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Gravity

Celestials' envy,

          Earth's seraphic gravity,

            Revolving in love !








Written on 24/5/14
Haiku - 5/7/5
Contest - Picture this # 1
Sponsor- SKAT- A

Copyright © Dr. Upma A. Sharma | Year Posted 2014

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July 10, 2014 at 5:08 AM

Great imagery. Nice work!

July 9, 2014 at 8:57 PM

Ooh that is a happy one :) glad to see you on the list, you are good :)

Mark J. Halliday

July 9, 2014 at 3:11 AM

Romantic, nicely done. Congrats.

Poet Destroyer A

July 8, 2014 at 11:26 PM

Dr Upma, nice win..PD

July 8, 2014 at 10:04 PM

I love this one...Congrats on the win

July 8, 2014 at 8:55 PM

Congrats on a beautiful win, Upma my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene

July 8, 2014 at 5:58 PM

Very beautiful, Upma...I like it very much. Congratulations.

Andrea Dietrich

July 8, 2014 at 4:01 PM

awww, this one had been a favorite of mine. Wish it got higher on the list. Anyway, it was nice to see it again.

July 8, 2014 at 9:51 AM

Excellent haiku, Upma...one of the best that I have read so far. Congrats on a fine win. // paul

July 8, 2014 at 9:41 AM

And that they do Upma, revolve in love, as one can't be without the other. Fine take on the contest, many congratulations, James.......

July 8, 2014 at 12:45 AM

Very thoughtful write, Dr. Upma. congrats on the win

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 8, 2014 at 2:01 AM

Thnx Dr Ram

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2014 at 12:22 AM

Hi Dr. Upma, congratulations on a beautiful win! Well-deserved!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 8, 2014 at 12:23 AM

Thnx Pandita ! Appreciate ur visit n lovely comments!

July 7, 2014 at 9:18 PM

Dr Upma, Congratulations, Thank you for the awesome haiku. Enjoy my -Most Recent Blog Post if you like. ""Super Blind - Super Quick..."" Love SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 8, 2014 at 12:08 AM

Thanks for lovely wishes n continued support ever my dear friend !

May 25, 2014 at 2:26 AM

The theme of this haiku is the middle ground of/missing link between the others I've read for the same contest. Good luck!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

May 26, 2014 at 8:04 AM

Thnx for wishes Jake !

Andrea Dietrich

May 25, 2014 at 12:14 AM

this is one of the most beautiful gravity haiku I have seen in the contest!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

May 26, 2014 at 8:03 AM

Thanks Andrea ! Too much an encouragement !

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