Paul Callus Poet Haiku

Gravity

shy Selene enthralled

 by Gaia’s bitter sweet spell

          magnetic allure


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Contest: Picture This # 1
Sponsor: SKAT A
22nd May 2014
Placing: 2nd

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Poet Destroyer A September 4, 2014 at 12:41 PM LOL... Salt punishments... Now that is a thought...Linda

Poet Destroyer A September 3, 2014 at 9:11 PM Oh, no! I turned my head, what happens next... Do I get zombiefied... LOL...JK Paul Callus September 4, 2014 at 8:18 AM Hope not! but you might be made to write a poem about zombies or salt statues as a punishment:) ... me JK too:)

Poet Destroyer A September 3, 2014 at 10:52 AM Yes, I do have to answer this :) One step at a time. I think, accepting would be my first step, and I have to say, i'm almost there. Hugs...Linda Paul Callus September 3, 2014 at 3:37 PM Great.....now look ahead, and do not dare turn your head...:)) hugs // paul

Poet Destroyer A September 2, 2014 at 10:15 AM Paul, I'm trying hard to come back.... LOl,,, I'm so bad, trying to see all the replies left in my comments... have a sweet day..Linda Paul Callus September 2, 2014 at 12:26 PM Take care Linda....a comeback to me means going forward...a step at a time. [now...you do not have to answer this:)] // paul

Poet Destroyer A August 24, 2014 at 11:40 AM Anytime Paul...hope you are well Paul Callus August 24, 2014 at 3:27 PM Hi Linda!! Lovely to see you again. I'm doing fine, thanks, though my hectic Parisian holiday took its toll!!

Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2014 at 5:51 PM thank you for supporting me and my comments...Linda Paul Callus August 7, 2014 at 5:46 AM You're welcome Linda...anytime:)

Debbie Guzzi July 9, 2014 at 7:50 PM Congrad's on your win Light & Love Paul Callus July 10, 2014 at 6:15 PM Many thanks, Debbie. Take care. // paul

Tim Smith July 9, 2014 at 7:28 PM I like the allure.....Congrats Tim Paul Callus July 10, 2014 at 6:14 PM Thank you, Tim; I appreciate the visit. // paul

Casarah Nance July 9, 2014 at 5:40 PM Ooh thats different, I like it :) grats on your win ;) Paul Callus July 9, 2014 at 6:06 PM Thank you Casarah; it's always encouraging to be on the winners' list:) // paul

Suryanarayana Murty Nauduri July 9, 2014 at 12:09 PM Hi Paul Callus Hearty Congrats for your #1 position. Paul Callus July 9, 2014 at 2:56 PM Many thanks for your wishes on my poem having placed in 2nd position. // paul

Teddy Kimathi July 9, 2014 at 3:48 AM A wonderful write you have there! A well deserved win Paul! :-) Paul Callus July 9, 2014 at 4:58 AM Thank you Teddy! Your 'harmonic anarchy' also appealed to me...and to the judge! // paul

Mark J. Halliday July 9, 2014 at 2:57 AM Beautifully done. Congrats. Paul Callus July 9, 2014 at 5:01 AM Hi Mark! Glad you liked it. Many thanks. Enjoyed your centrifugal force! // paul

Joseph May July 8, 2014 at 9:59 PM Congrats on a fine win Paul Paul Callus July 9, 2014 at 1:43 AM Thank you Joseph; I enjoyed your blue gem haiku, too. // paul

Greg Hoffman July 8, 2014 at 9:30 PM Congrats on your win,nicely done Paul Callus July 9, 2014 at 1:44 AM Thank you, Greg, for the wishes and the visit. cu // paul

David Mohn July 8, 2014 at 8:21 PM Congats Paul...A+ on originality Paul Callus July 9, 2014 at 1:35 AM Thank you David, you are too kind. I enjoyed your 'jealous earth' entry! // paul

Arlene Smith July 8, 2014 at 7:29 PM Ahh! Gravitate to each other's very clever my friend.. Congrats on a great win my friend! Hugs... Arlene Paul Callus July 9, 2014 at 1:30 AM Thank you Arlene; you read it well:) It was lovely to see you on the winning list, too! (...and lovely avatar, by the way...) // paul

Theresa Stephens July 8, 2014 at 5:14 PM Hi Paul, Congrats on your win. Cleverly done Haiku. Well done on your win.Regards Theresa xx Paul Callus July 8, 2014 at 5:25 PM Thank you Theresa for the wishes and unfailing supportive remarks. /x/ paul

Andrea Dietrich July 8, 2014 at 3:35 PM Big congrats for your win. Almost forgot about this contest!! Loved the Selene allusion. Paul Callus July 8, 2014 at 5:14 PM Yes, I too had forgotten about it, so the result came as a pleasant surprise! Thank you Andrea...for the wishes and comments. // paul

Faye Gibson July 8, 2014 at 2:53 PM Lovely, Paul. Congratulations on a fine win. Paul Callus July 8, 2014 at 5:08 PM Thank you Faye. Yes, it's a very satisfactory result, considering the amount of excellent entries. // paul

John Lawless July 8, 2014 at 1:27 PM who can resist? Nicely done Paul. Paul Callus July 8, 2014 at 2:22 PM Glad you like my magnetic allure, John! Thank you. // paul

James Fraser July 8, 2014 at 10:06 AM Magnetic they are, and out there, they're Stars in more ways than one. Beautiful capture of the 'Gravity' contest theme Paul. Many congratulations on your fine deserved placing in the contest, James...... Paul Callus July 8, 2014 at 2:20 PM Thank you James; your haiku received deserved recognition...thus we finished on same podium! // paul

S.Jagathsimhan Nair July 8, 2014 at 5:33 AM Congrats on the top win. Thnx for stopping by! Paul Callus July 8, 2014 at 2:14 PM Thank you S.J. [I'm still smiling at your bawdy limerick!] // paul

Dr.Ram Mehta July 8, 2014 at 12:10 AM Lovely take on the picture, Paul. congrats on the win Paul Callus July 8, 2014 at 2:12 PM Many thanks Dr! The competition out there has been keen and healthy! // paul

Pandita Sietesantos July 8, 2014 at 12:02 AM Hi Paul, Bravo - my friend. Congratulations on a beautiful win for a beautiful Haiku! Well-deserved! Paul Callus July 8, 2014 at 2:10 PM Thank you dear Pandita! Our two haiku are sort of related in content:) Yours is also a deserved win! // paul

Poet Destroyer A July 7, 2014 at 9:30 PM Awesome win...Linda Paul Callus July 8, 2014 at 2:06 PM Thank you Linda; will catch up with you later! / paul

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