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Gravity

you try to keep me down like gravity all you do is lie to me spit in my face and laugh at me who do you think you are I've come too far to let you take me back to a point in my life where i felt so bad so it makes me mad to hear those words come out your mouth you don't have the power to effect me past a hour I'm too strong to listen to your words, that are so wrong speak your lies throw your jabs its ok i can take it

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/11/2010 10:56:00 AM
Your poetry was a pleasure to read today Chamonique. May your weekend be full of love,good health and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/10/2010 4:11:00 PM
Strong write my friend, I like your courage "throw your jabs",, it shows your strength letting that person know they can't break your spirit, loved it... smiles:)
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Date: 6/10/2010 4:06:00 PM
I'm glad you have the strength to avoid getting back into a relationship with someone who brings you "down like gravity," Chamonique. And I admire your determination too. Thanks for sharing, love, Carolyn
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