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In a world of hopeless escape; Dreams of freedom fill the eye. And as the flickering of a flame; Reveals the passing of their time; The victims of an unnamed rapture; Must choose random selections of a living desire

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/24/2010 12:59:00 PM
Much captured in this poem for the reader to reflect one. Interesting title. Well done! Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Karen
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Date: 2/7/2010 7:15:00 AM
Well said and such an intriguing write.
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Date: 2/7/2010 6:09:00 AM
Like the metaphor
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