Gravity

In a world of hopeless escape;
Dreams of freedom fill the eye.
      And as the flickering of a flame;
      Reveals the passing of their time;
The victims of an unnamed rapture;
Must choose random selections of a living desire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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February 24, 2010 at 12:59 PM
Much captured in this poem for the reader to reflect one. Interesting title. Well done! Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Karen
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February 7, 2010 at 7:15 AM
Well said and such an intriguing write.
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February 7, 2010 at 6:09 AM
Like the metaphor
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