Red Fiery Poet Free verse

Graveyard Diggers- a Frustrated Quest

LETS NOT CRY FOR THOSE WHO ARE DEAD

AS EMOTIONS ARE BURIED IN THE GRAVEYARD

LONGING FOR LOVE IS FUTILE

PALE AND FRAGILE

I WISH THOSE BLUE EYES

TO BE MINE FOREVER

ALAS ! DREAMS ARE THE ENEMIES OF DAYLIGHT

MOONLIGHT IS CONCEALING MY THOUGHTS

INSOMNIA IS GRIPPING MY VISION

WAYWARD THOUGHTS CULMINATES AS

MY LOVE POEMS ARE CHAINED IN PRISON…








Redfiery
2011

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Richard Lamoureux August 13, 2013 at 7:46 AM Nick made a good suggestion although I feel it feels like one poem and two stanzas. Red Fiery August 13, 2013 at 8:35 AM I was very frustrated while writing this one...I still remember. ..

John Loving Iii January 12, 2012 at 8:04 PM I know the meaning of the last line.

Nick Bagnall January 11, 2012 at 5:09 AM An interesting and emotional poem, I kind of felt it was two poems run into one, could have easily split it after line 6, enjoyed the read.

John-Ovan.P. Hull January 1, 2012 at 8:06 AM Bravo! Here's hoping that this year sees you find the person with the keys to unlock your prison, so both can live through an eternal night of sweet dreams.

John Loving Iii December 31, 2011 at 9:27 AM loved it.

Harry Horsman December 31, 2011 at 7:20 AM What a wonderful poem this is, Dreams are the enemy of daylight. wow just blows one away. Oh, by the way, i was a grave digger at the age of 15, not many poets can admit to that. Have yourself a wonderful New Year. harry

David Williams December 30, 2011 at 3:14 AM Red I like this, but let your inner love poems be unchained..David

M.I.A . December 29, 2011 at 8:30 PM evoking emotions you presented here Red. pretty profound stuff. wishing you a great happy new year to come