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humid trail of life over dry words and numbers - snail on a tombstone 11/20/2019 A Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Syllables Per Line: 5 7 5

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Date: 11/28/2019 7:22:00 PM
In the box/coffin, maggots and worms; on the gravestone, snails. How lowly is man, whose end is but the worm! Nice ku, Kurt! Happy Thursday/Friday! ~ Volkov
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Date: 11/24/2019 11:04:00 AM
Powerful picture, simplicity of words, captured... aptly tortured, and left solemn... wonderful read... Ann Wow, I just noticed I already came to this poem and posted... It really is powerful to draw me twice by its light. Excellence....
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 11/24/2019 12:05:00 PM
Oh, thank you very much, Ann. Your double visit is the best praise to me. Rays of love)
Date: 11/22/2019 9:51:00 PM
Kurt, I agree with Ann & Panagiota. It has a slick slimy foreboding feel to it. I like that feeling. -Richard
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 11/24/2019 12:02:00 PM
Thank you, Richard)
Date: 11/20/2019 10:01:00 AM
This was coldly perfect in is sadly icy lonely imagery... Excellent. Ann
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 11/21/2019 1:55:00 AM
Thank you, Ann)
Date: 11/20/2019 8:24:00 AM
Kurt.... Soooo descriptive. Wonderful Panagiota
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Kurt Ravidas
Date: 11/21/2019 1:54:00 AM
Thanks, Panagiota)