Grave-Side Service

weather-beaten sign
driven down in dying weeds
forsaken headstone
oh nameless, forgotten soul
the Savior knows who you are
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2017 at 8:20 PM
This says so much and it has such awesome description. Just passing by again to see you and Congratulate you. Wish I saw you here more often (Just looked down and saw that I loved this one just as much as now back in 2015)
De Burca Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 7:02 PM
a 7 from me just love it, congrats on your win also.
Merryman Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 4:31 PM
I like this, Tim! Congrats on your win! Blessings!
A  Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 1:29 AM
Tim, lovely to see your poem make it on my sisys contest. SKAT
A   Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 1:09 AM
Tim R, Congratulations on your win. Stop by and enjoy my blog "The Perils of Getting Old" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
A  Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 9:38 PM
Tim, Congratulations on your win. -SKAT-
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 7:58 PM
congrats yet again with this amazing tanka. it's got to be one of your best ever.
Puddifoot Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 6:35 PM
this is a well written tanka, enjoyed reading - congrats on your win in the contest, dear man :)
Inman Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 9:41 AM
Lovely poem, Tim
Haight Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 8:56 AM
Tim, such powerful words that bring to mind the image of that sign with its blankness of identity...I felt the pain in my heart. Congratulations on your nice win. Sandra
A. Sharma Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 2:14 AM
Congrats on superb win Tim with this wonderful write!
Lindley Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 8:42 PM
Congrats on your win with this fine Tanka.
Neels Avatar
March 8, 2015 at 12:30 PM
Oh my, love the last two lines Tim ;) absolutely love it! Hope your weekend is a great one xxx
Guzzi Avatar
February 20, 2015 at 4:00 PM
Excellent tanka - you should work more in this form you have mastered the skill! Congrad's on your win Light & Love
A   Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 9:58 PM
this is deep Tim, nice win..>PD<
A  Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 11:55 PM
Tim, Awesome Tanka Tears win. ~Skat~
Deschler Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 10:25 PM
I visit cemeteries quite a lot, because I find the history to be so fascinating, and it is sad when I see a gravesite not being taken care of. No one is really gone if we remember them. To be forgotten on earth, is to be truly dead... A somber poem, but also a reassuring and comforting one. Beautifully written, Tim!
Roper Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 3:18 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well expressed Blessings Eve
Allison Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 11:34 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations:-) Hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Tim, congrats on being one of several HMs . there was only one winner in this contest. Seems so odd to me!!! anyway, i had really admired this one~
Haight Avatar
February 12, 2015 at 4:38 PM
Tim, such powerful words that bring to mind the image of that sign with its blankness of identity...I felt the pain in my heart. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
Dietrich Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 2:16 PM
wow, Tim, this is one of the best I have seen in that tanka contest. I really have to get on the ball and get mine done for this. I love how the last line puts it all in perspective.
Sirak Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 8:34 AM
Stunning! The last line is perfect. None of us are nameless with God.
Callus Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 4:20 AM
I like how you brought to our attention this nameless and forgotten grave, Tim. Very good poem with a subjective pivot and a lovely ending. #7 // paul
Guzzi Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 7:50 PM
excellent tanka! afav for me too! thanks so much cher for stopping by! Light & Love
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