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Graveling Potatoes

There were potatoes planted deep
In the early cold sping
So soon that a frost still could come
And nip the tender green

Unharmed by a sudden frost's bite
They grow to unusual height
Then the blossoms faded fast
Signaling harvest rites  
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Rigoler Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 2:59 PM
Reminds me of my boyhood when my grandparents grew all their vegetables in a huge garden and canned just about everything that they could. You probably know that the old word for digging up potatoes was "helling," which my have led certain translator of the Bible to render Hades (original Gree) as Hell. Thanks for stopping by. / M
Kendrick Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 3:09 PM
Unfamiliar term helling for digging potatoes..Good information..Sara
A  Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 7:44 PM
Sarah Have yourself a safe and Happy 4th of July.... Love SKAT
Callus Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 3:38 PM
Hi Sara...I love this poem because it takes me back many years when I used to help my grandparents to dig up and collect the potatoes. Back then I wanted to become a farmer...instead I spent all my life teaching! I notice that both you and Doris wrote on this same subject:) // paul
A  Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 11:03 PM
Sara, I like the nature and natural vast of this poem. They might fade, but will return .. as you said, harvest rites
Kendrick Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 5:39 AM
Thanks for dropping by..I have to write about that which I know a little about and that is what I know..I still seek to find information about nature and the natural..Sara
La France Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 10:49 PM
Sara, I admire gardners who grow vegetables, it takes skill and thanks for visiting my clerihew poem
La France Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 5:43 AM
It is a lot of work, my parents used to enjoy vegetable gardening
Kendrick Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 5:38 AM
My husband does love to plant a garden but we are no longer able to do all that work but he still gets out there and plants..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 10:20 PM
Oh, I bet they look nice. I love potatoes!!
Kendrick Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 5:37 AM
He planted about 5 lbs of red potatoes..We have harvested about 8 5 gallon buckets of potatoes..My husband gives away a good amount of the harvest..I went out there on Memorial Day morning with him and we gather most of them..I am still sore and hurting...Sara
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