Grave

My heart cries more whenever I see very short lifetime written on the grave.


Contest - Sad One Line
Sponsored by: Silent One

Date - 12th October 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 3:50 PM
this is sad, Congrats for the win I see you got
Day Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 8:28 AM
I feel the emotion - nicely stated. Congrats on your win! Jesse
Scars Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 11:45 AM
yes Augustus, life is way too short...congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Black Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 11:35 PM
Thanks a lot.
Black Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 8:09 PM
Thanks to all.
Babbit Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 11:37 AM
Congrats, life indeed is too short.
Smith Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Congratulations Augustus, well done...
Nusker Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Congrats on your win with this truly sad one liner, Augustus.
Andresen Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 11:05 AM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest, Augustus - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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