Gratitude

Your benevolence is incomprehensible,
I am but an ant in Your sight,
still You fought for me when I was termed dismissable
and my star has suddenly become bright
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sietesantos Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 9:37 AM
Beautiful, deep, powerful piece! Warmest regards. Pandita
Adetoro Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 7:49 AM
Thank you Pandita. *warm hugs*
Sadig El Waad Avatar
November 11, 2014 at 6:44 AM
Short but spiritually meaningful. I like it.
Adetoro Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 7:50 AM
Hey Jaafar, I 'm really glad you do
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November 2, 2014 at 6:46 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Adebusola - I choose your first well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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November 13, 2014 at 7:51 AM
Hello Anne Lise, thank you for the warm welcome. this feels like home already. I really do love to be here.
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