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Gratitude


Low tide.
Scattered rocks wear 
weedy jackets to shield
sea life from the drying air
and in the far distance,
clouds leak a fine mist of rain 
as if to cool the heat 
of a setting sun.

It is a joy to be here -
on this beach, at this moment 
that has taken the universe
billions of years to unfold
by blowing up stars, recycling 
the leftovers into the wonder
that is here and to take it in,
made me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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June 30, 2025 at 5:02 PM
Profound and a incredibly beautiful poem of appreciation and gratitude Paul….gratitude in the moment! Another Profound Paul beauty hehe!! Debx
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June 30, 2025 at 5:12 PM
Thankyou Deb...pleased that something in the poem managed to shine through and attract such kind words. Trust you are well my dear friend. Not sure where you are but I see the East Coast is up for a battering today...fortunately will miss us down south...trust same for you.
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