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The sole praise for being blessed is priceless. Inhale the soft glow of the soul welly. It's false to force others to your embrace. He just pulls the faint air from blessed body. Desire to get rid of gloom and sadness. What a gloss golden chance to be alive. Leading, sustaining, and soulful living. There have been few reshaping swarmed to thrive. Regret has excelled in untethering. Having reached a whit of skill to contrive. What glory has been given utterly? Our goal is to live as long as feasible. I loathe the stoics for their tenacity. Ignore your claim round ranking audible. What we've created is almost perfectly. What an excellent feeling that all is good. As I rode, I grasped how to be together. The work is still in the layering hood. It was an outcome of prior sway blunder. This is a huge gift from the diced awards lured.
Written: November 22, 2021

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Date: 12/14/2021 9:14:00 AM
I really enjoyed your write and picture. Have a wonderful/blessed day.............
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Date: 11/24/2021 6:52:00 AM
Thought provoking verse with a message of gratitude. Hope you have a lovely thanksgiving tomorrow Lasaad. Tom
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Date: 11/24/2021 3:48:00 AM
A valley of poetry's beauty that inspires and uplifts the heart of the reader, my friend Lasaad! Blessings.
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Date: 11/23/2021 9:01:00 PM
'What a gloss golden chance to be alive. ' Indeed when many are called away prematurely, what a blessing it is to be alive ! You are full of gratefulness for being alive and for the blessings you receive ! A calming piece of poem, mild and sweet! Stay blessed Lassad !
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Date: 11/23/2021 6:07:00 AM
Your grateful insights evoke upbeat feelings. Much inspiration you convey, Lasaad, in these graceful verses.
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Date: 11/23/2021 5:39:00 AM
WoW! Lasaad, What a well-written write with a good message. I enjoyed the serene tone and vibe of your write. Excellent job. Have a great day my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/23/2021 3:35:00 AM
This is excellent. Calming and inspiring. Well done :)
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Date: 11/23/2021 3:33:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work. We tend to forget to be thankful for even being alive. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Thanks..Sara
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Date: 11/23/2021 1:57:00 AM
when we see all around us people dying, we should be grateful we ourselves ae alive. But life belongs to this world. What are we doing for the next one?
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Date: 11/23/2021 1:50:00 AM
My take on this well said piece is that life itself is a blessing and what we do with that life is our gift back to the creator. All that surrounds us in nature is another blessing but Mankind is slowly killing that blessing with his constant need to take and never give back. Praise is an important part of life. To say Thank You to the creator for all He has done and all He is doing but Man continues to ignore The Lord and be proud of his own work. Big Mistake Hope I got this right God Bless JB
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