Sotto Poet Poet Haiku

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Grasslands

in verdant grasslands
rusted trucks rest, overlooked~
all that is still deer

Written: April 02, 2023

4th place contest winner 

A New Nature Themed Haiku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Andrea Dietrich April 11, 2023 at 9:01 PM Congrats on your win

Andrea Dietrich April 11, 2023 at 9:01 PM Hmmm a play on words? I wrote on deer top.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 9, 2023 at 10:45 AM - Congratulations on your lovely haiku, Las :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin April 9, 2023 at 8:31 AM Lasaad, a creative one with vivid imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!

Sara Kendrick April 4, 2023 at 1:41 PM Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. I like play on words with using deer instead of dear. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Alexis Y. April 3, 2023 at 5:31 AM Hi Lasaad, You have penned a well written haiku, good photo also. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Yann Rolland April 3, 2023 at 12:42 AM original and some freedom expressed, thanks

Anisha Dutta April 2, 2023 at 10:48 PM Wow ! I am charmed..

Valsa George April 2, 2023 at 8:38 PM Lovely haiku on verdant grasslands. Growth and decay powerfully combined. The poem and the image are equally pleasing, dear Lasaad !