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Grass

Dry grass staring at
Sweet water in your sleek glass
A sudden tempest
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17/12/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Trifiatis Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Masterful! A seven!
Gupta Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 4:32 AM
Thank you ...
Wolf Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 7:28 PM
The longer I stare at your haiku the more depth I find! It quenches the mind!
Gupta Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 11:22 PM
In that case my 5-7-5 are becoming real haikus ... Thank you ...
Green Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 5:34 PM
Very cool, I liked this a lot Probir. Makes me think.
Gupta Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 11:26 PM
I am honoured ... If just three little cognitive lines can make a sensitive poet like you think, what else I need ...
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