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Grass

Dry grass staring at Sweet water in your sleek glass A sudden tempest _________________________________________ 17/12/2016

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Date: 12/17/2016 8:48:00 AM
Masterful! A seven!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/18/2016 4:32:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 12/16/2016 7:28:00 PM
The longer I stare at your haiku the more depth I find! It quenches the mind!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/16/2016 11:22:00 PM
In that case my 5-7-5 are becoming real haikus ... Thank you ...
Date: 12/16/2016 5:34:00 PM
Very cool, I liked this a lot Probir. Makes me think.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 12/16/2016 11:26:00 PM
I am honoured ... If just three little cognitive lines can make a sensitive poet like you think, what else I need ...

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