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“plunge in now, into the current reclaim true self, luminescent” _ quote by poet ________________________________ heart throbs soar when blessings in-pour consciousness core, seeking encore let’s out as gasp, failing to grasp fleeting illusions cannot clasp down on all fours, we yet seek more each breath we inhale, must exhale letting go then, why fears assail with God our guide, fearlessly glide propelled by His life breath inside renouncing erst desires, now stale fears serpentine, poisonous vines with heart entwine, bind and confine plunging our soul in deep despair until with love sublime we pair blissful, when head and heart align embrace, hold and release with ease flowing like the fresh morning breeze heart with love hued, our mind aware urge to cling and clutch, ego snare one with Gods light, as we unfreeze 26-June-2021 (syllabic rhyme) Writing Prompt - Grasp - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Employing the following 10 words once only: soar, gasp, grasp, clasp, inhale, glide, vines, hold, hued, clutch

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Date: 7/16/2021 1:14:00 PM
Beautiful write, Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/16/2021 9:34:00 PM
Thank you Joseph!
Date: 7/16/2021 11:39:00 AM
Seeker, congratulations on your placement in my Writing Prompt - Grasp - Challenge! I really like your quote and your chosen image and your use of the required words is excellent ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 7/16/2021 9:34:00 PM
Thank you, Constance! You have an art of conjuring interesting contests!
Date: 7/12/2021 7:04:00 AM
fears serpentine, poisonous vines with heart entwine, bind and confine Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/12/2021 8:24:00 AM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 6/26/2021 2:57:00 AM
You did well in this contest.
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