Grapevine

flowing 
        spring 
               river
a breezy 
         grapevine 
                  sings 
                       flows
by pure 
          vibration


1st place contest win

03/19/2021

For the contest, Lets Get Creative with Haiku
sponsor, Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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La France Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 3:16 PM
Lasaad, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative with Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this excellent non traditional Haiku, well done _Constance
Poet Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 3:27 PM
Thanks for your kind words Constance, I'm so proudly delighted by this win, and thank you for the idea too; I hope to see you in coming contests
Ligon Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 8:18 AM
Nice layout and beautiful words! Congratulations!
Poet Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 1:27 PM
Dear Juliet, thanks for the kind words, please keep reading, any work takes its value from the views of others. Best wishes Juliet, // Las
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 4:31 PM
very creative Lasaad:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Poet Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 7:18 PM
Thank you so much for reading and commenting, best wishes to you
Merryman Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 4:22 PM
I like this, Lasaad! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Poet Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 4:30 PM
Dear Kim, Thank you so much for your very kind words, with my deepest respect and nice wishes
Ashley Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 2:33 PM
Dear Lasaad, I’m very happy to return with congratulations for your excellent win in Constance’s contest with your lovely haiku. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Poet Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 2:41 PM
Dear Susan, Thank you so much for your lovely congratulations words. You were among the first ones who predicted this win; that's obviously due to your incredible talent and deep knowledge of poetry. My great respect and Sincere wishes, Susan
Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 2:11 PM
very nicely done.. and WON. Congrats.
Poet Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 2:18 PM
Dear Andrea, thanks for your kind words; you predicted this win way before the end of the contest; I'm so proud to get to know a wonderfully talented poet. Best wishes Andrea
Neumann Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 1:42 PM
Wonderful. Congratulations on your winning poem ...Kind wishes, Kai
Poet Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 1:51 PM
Thank you so much for your very kind words wishes, dear Kai Michael, it was so lovely of you, and I'm pleased to get to know a wonderfully talented poet. Best wishes, Las
Andresen Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 12:39 PM
- Back with a congratulations, I knew this would be a top winner :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Poet Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 1:34 PM
Dear ANNE Thank you so much for your lovely congratulations words, Actually your the first one who predicted this win, that's obviously due to your incredible talent and deep knowledge of poetry. My great respect and Sincere wishes Anne
Y. Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 11:42 AM
Hi Lasaad, Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Poet Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 12:15 PM
Hi, Alexis, I can't find words to express my gratitude. It's all due to your brilliant idea that sparkles the flow of sentiments and expressions. Thank you so much, Alexis.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 1:31 AM
The flow of this kind of sings; I can hear a melody. Good luck in Constance's contest!
Poet Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 12:17 PM
Dear Caren, thanks for your feedback; I just got the notice that it was a great win.
La France Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 11:48 AM
Lasaad, I have sent you an Urgent soupmail _Constance
Poet Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 12:02 PM
Dear Constance, thanks for your email; I replied on soupmail. Thanks
Ashley Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 10:21 AM
Dear Lasaad, your beautiful imagery sparkles in the flow of your wondrous pen. Your capture the moment with poetic finesse. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
Ashley Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 11:44 AM
It was my pleasure, my friend. I love the loveliness of grapevines :)
Poet Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 10:56 AM
Best regards, Susan. It's nice to see you! Thank you very much for your kind words, my friend. I'm glad you joined me at Grapevine:) Well wishes...Lasaad
Buhagiar Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 2:06 AM
Constance will love this. Good luck.
Poet Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 6:35 AM
Thank you for your kind words of encouragement Victor, I am pleased you like my verses and wish you the best of luck in the contest.
Hankins Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 3:58 PM
I love the way you presented your non-traditional haiku, Lasaad. I could feel it swinging! Enjoyed. Best of luck in the contest.
Poet Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 4:07 PM
Thank you so much L Milton, I really admire your kind words. You can never realize how anyone else feels about your job until you put it out there for them to be judged. Of all of his poems, just the best ones mean something to me. It was really kind of you.Thank you
Andresen Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 3:28 PM
- Excellent written - Best wishes in the contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Poet Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 3:36 PM
Thank you, Dear Sunshine, I greatly appreciate your comment. You never really know how someone else sees your work unless they post it. Specifically when it comes from a great talented poet. Best wishes in the contest
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