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“Your fine, flawless flesh And your sweet aroma, so fresh Is all that I desire. You right here is all I require Your delicious taste against my lips Without it my heart is in strips It is the only thing I’ll ever need And what will allow my mind to be freed. I long to see you mature Time is nothing but a trial to endure My wish is to watch you dry Under the sun, way up in the sky Your body is cold, my dear My warm hands are right here Your soft, chili touch on my skin Makes me wonder what could have been.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/21/2016 9:23:00 AM
awesome to read this again, Jack... skat
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Date: 12/11/2015 2:33:00 PM
Hi Jake, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 (which is the highest score you can get or receive)! Pandita
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Date: 12/10/2015 2:14:00 PM
Hi Jake, I like the taste of this poem, plus your wonder. :) WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 12/10/2015 12:04:00 PM
Jake, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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