Ty Price Poet Free verse

Granted

Fresh spring cut grass separates the toes,

A soft breeze guides the air,
Gently caressing her angelic hair,

Illuminated as if even the sun belonged to this divine presence, 

Captivating gazes to my core leaving me transparent,
Eternity skips ahead leaving me to recount my woes,


Cold wood shivers forgotten slippers,
Heavy sighs rejuvenate the stale ambiance,

Consumed by an expanding shadowed audience,
Evaluating my cracked soul for pleasure, 

Left to lose all composure, 

Even the sweetest can turn bitter.

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Shaz Cheesman July 13, 2013 at 1:13 AM Beautiful moment then flipped on its head......wow. Another great write...you have the ability to say alot in such few lines....thankyou for sharing....Shaz Ty Price July 15, 2013 at 1:04 AM Thank you again, poetry's meant to be shared, iI'm just glad you enjoyed it.

Poet Destroyer A September 20, 2012 at 1:38 PM TY, awe... i like the feel of your poem. i love the image of stepping on to fresh grass with barefoot. To come think of it, I'm intrigued by the way you describe this captivating canvas, and turning it to what is and will be... an amazing and unique style you have.. Not many can be so passionate with similes and metaphors.. xox~LINDA Ty Price September 21, 2012 at 3:45 AM Thank you, I really like imagery and the ability to paint a picture in your head, or at least the to able to feel the emotions im trying to display

Carol Sunshine Brown September 5, 2012 at 1:33 PM I am so happy to have time to read some wonderful poetry today. Glad yours was one of the pieces I was able to read Ty. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol Ty Price September 6, 2012 at 1:47 AM Thank you for the reassuring words, it motivates me to keep writing!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 5, 2012 at 2:09 AM You describe feeling well - A well written poem Ty - Have a great Wednesday. - Oxox love Anne-Lise :) Ty Price September 5, 2012 at 2:40 AM Thank you, hope your Wednesday is great as well.