Grant Me This Wish

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Where to start?
But asleep is the hope of mine
In the shadows of my dreams
The crimson curtains have collapsed
And are cemented to the floor 
Entombed behind the stage of life
Petrified
Where to start 

Ardently athirst 
For this masterpiece to become a reality 
Are there any more enduring rays 
To blaze this shroud and open the pathway 
For the music was born
Far beyond in the heavens

But I am only just dim color 
Formerly, once bright 
Wishing upon the shine  
Wishing upon the moon,
Wishing upon the stars
Hear the rhythm of my heart
How many tears need to fall? 

Before I am reborn  
Replenished 
To cherish that someone 

Thunder and Light help 
Energize my ai’s 
Awaken me from the tomb of stone 
Sight 
 
Desiring the removal 
So, I may peel this medusa face from my form
And crawl out of the sands

And stand on holy ground 
With a new coating 
Of majestic color
And an armor of varnish 

My yearning invocation 
My yearning benediction 
To reach for this Sapphire Star 
Savoring the breath of life 

To not lose what I want most 
To ascended with the dawn of the morrow
To hold the never-ending morning solar rise 

For the present, is a present, in the presences of you 

To hold the never-ending morning solar rise 
To ascended into the dawn of the morrow
To not lose what I want most 

Aglow 
A bright halo 
Musical 
Under the Lights mistletoe 
And to never let go 

The Empyreal Sapphire Star of resonating beauty
A dance along the skyline
Beholding the Daughter of Divine
This pulchritudinous nymph of the Almighty 
A wish
My wish 
Upon the cosmos
A wish to embrace her exaltedness 
For all time and all eternity  


1/10/2020 Edit 1/16/2020
Picture Prompt Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brenda Chiri 
February 4, 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/28/2020 12:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and thank you for entering my contest!;)
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G. Jay
Date: 2/2/2020 6:49:00 PM
Thank you and Thank you for hosting the contest (picture) thus giving me the idea in forming this poem.
Date: 1/19/2020 7:38:00 AM
Some great choice of words in this poem... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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G. Jay
Date: 2/2/2020 6:44:00 PM
Thank you for allowing me to enter.
Date: 1/10/2020 9:40:00 PM
Ideas and words from the following poems of mine were used for this poem: Autumn Leaves, My Oneiric Periwinkle Diamond, Paint Me an Ugly Duck, Reveries, The Crescent Moon, The Eye’s Spot, The Winter’s Lullaby, Where to Start? Gaia’s Fission
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