Granola

Time t'was the ol' Cap'n for me
Them Crunchberries coated my teeth
Once I came to my senses
Granola's pretenses
hugged me to firm grounding beneath.

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Ahoy there!


(for PD's 'test)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 9:56 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Favorite Cereal" contest Nancy. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 9:52 PM
Congrats Nancy with this great win for Granola luv... enjoy a yummy and healthy treat luv..
Freeman Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 12:03 PM
To each his own Nancy. Hate this one Smile! Congrats on your worthy Limerick. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 4:17 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., Nancy
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 1:30 AM
haha. you went from sweet to more grounded. You are all "growed up" now, Nancy! (wish I could do that) Congrats on your win with this cute poem.
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October 9, 2011 at 12:26 AM
DEAR , NANCY, CONGRATULATIONS! ;-) THANKS FOR SUPPORTING MY CONTEST, WITH YOUR FUNNY cereal LIMERICK,..ALWAYS,..P.D.
Poet Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 2:49 PM
Very nice Limerick .Enjoyed.Best wishes for the contest.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 29, 2011 at 8:05 PM
who can forget Captain Crunch Nancy and who could pen such a terrific entry but u luv.. good luck in the contest... feeling that granola twinge now..
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