Grandson-Grandma Collaboration



My Love for Dogs

Dogs cute and fluffy!
Of all shapes and sizes, 
some look so puffy.

Some dogs' hair is scruffy.
Comb them, please and make
them sightly!

Grandma and I wrote this poem
together.
A familial treasure, beyond any
measure!

(Written by Panagiota and her
grandson, Eddie)



Short Bio~*
Eddie is studying Poetry and is
thirteen.
He loves a 'Midsummer's Night's
Dream' and was when only ten
when he saw it!
Performed outdoors at....
Lake Tahoe, California.

Love, Panagiota and Eddie

October 2, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 11:30 AM
This is chuckle worthy indeed, Iota! Cool collab for sure. Tell Eddie, I like his ink flow. It only gets better w/practice. Love and joy always.
Romios Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 12:18 PM
I will tell Eddie. He writes far more complex poetry than this, but his Mom thinks he's too young to post here. She's way right. There is some racy stuff here, he need not read. He has great images with his poetry. He plays piano as I said, tons of homework each night, plus chores.and attends a Christian school. He's more than familiar with the Bible as you can tell, I am proud of him and his room full of trophies...Panagiota xx
Dietrich Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 11:06 AM
so cute!! I am glad I found it, Panagiota. He shows great promise as a poet. I see he is same age as my natalyn!
Romios Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 11:15 AM
He just became 13. His poetry is excellent. I have no such adjective about mine! He has only been writing poetry for two weeks. I read him some Pablo Neruda poem. Was amazed he liked it. natalyn is an stunning poet!
Perrin Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 6:16 AM
What a lovely idea to write a poem together. You must be so proud he is following in your footsteps:-) I adore this x
Romios Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 7:36 AM
Elaine! So glad you enjoyed this. I will have Eddie see your reply and others... Yes, I am thrilled we were able to collaborate. I was not sure he would! He did-)) Thank you, Panagiota. xxx
Gauthier Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 4:38 PM
Wonderful, Panagiota and Eddie.
Romios Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 4:41 PM
Aww, you sweetheart, Eddie and I love you. Thank you. Panagiota.xxx
Lindley Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 2:17 PM
A wonderful collaboration between two fine poets. A treasure that gifts both authors and inspires its readers to see and know that poetry is to be loved. admired and encouraged! A fav my friend. God bless....
Romios Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 2:22 PM
Robert! I consider you part of my family. I am so pleased he likes Shakespeare! That's a big plus. He should write about his passion...baseball! I don't know why I haven't tried this earlier. Yes- will encourage him. Love you, Panagiota
Krutsinger Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 12:33 PM
Eddie and you have written a wonderful poem! Loved it!
Romios Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 12:40 PM
Caren, so sweet of you to be the first responder. Eddie did well...thank you And for me, this is a treasure! Will have my daughter print it. I already made it photo card, Panagiota xxxx
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