Grandpa's Tree


The lush mango tree in blooming youth
  dances to the whispers of summer breeze,
I remember grandpa's sheer joy in his eyes
   bubbling a world of stories as he'd planted it.
His love and fatherly care in those sprouts
    made green leaves drip shimmering kindness
on moonless nights, wrapped in mystic blankets
    as he taught me folk songs playing his flute.
Ten years later, the mango tree reminds me
    his kindness, love and grace in strength
to be sprinkled in a world without him
    ripe sweet mangoes gifts bestowed on me.
A glimpse of white clouds peeping through leaves
    swaying with wind seems like his symphony
dancing on flute echoing folk songs in my memory.
    A tender shade of tranquility in my life,
grandpa remains with me in a mortal world
    cocooned in the branches of his old tree.


June 30, 2020

In Loving Memory Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Regina Riddle
~Winner: 1st Place

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Date: 7/6/2020 12:31:00 PM
It's gratifying to see your talents and loving pen acknowledged with a #1 win in the contest, Aditi. I congratulate you for your deserved win. Blessings ~ John
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Date: 7/7/2020 1:29:00 AM
Thank you for another visit and your heartiest wishes my friend. Your blessings always make my day. Have a good day :)
Date: 7/6/2020 10:43:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to your grandpa Aditi, happy memories his tree provides, congrats on your win. Tom
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Date: 7/6/2020 11:49:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Tom :) Blessings!
Date: 7/6/2020 4:45:00 AM
Congratulations dear Aditi mam:-) "A glimpse of white clouds peeping through leaves swaying with wind seems like his symphony".I liked this line very much:-).Yes,they are always synced with nature,for us to feel their presence even after they're no more.Lovely memory.So, now I know you have learnt folk songs too.You are highly talented soul:-)Much love to you:-):-)
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Date: 7/6/2020 11:48:00 AM
I am so glad you love my words Deepa. He taught me a number of things that I will always cherish. Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation. Blessings and love :)
Date: 7/5/2020 10:57:00 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP always. Love.
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Date: 7/6/2020 11:47:00 AM
Thank you for your blessed love Ma'am. Blessings and love to you :)
Date: 7/5/2020 8:15:00 PM
Aditi, beautiful creative verse if not wonderful memories of the mango tree and your grandfather. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/6/2020 11:47:00 AM
Thank you for your kind appreciation for my words Eve. Blessings and love :)
Date: 7/5/2020 4:36:00 PM
Congratulations, Aditi, on your top win. A touching tribute to your grandpa. Love and best wishes, Mala
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Date: 7/6/2020 11:46:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind appreciation Mala. Glad you love my words. Blessings and love :)
Date: 7/5/2020 3:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win dear Aditi . This is a very heart-warming tribute to your grand paa. Well-writ.
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Date: 7/5/2020 4:08:00 PM
Thank you for your gracious wishes and appreciation. Blessings and love :)
Date: 7/5/2020 3:08:00 PM
I so enjoyed your poem, dear friend. I wish you a congrats on top placement and many more beautiful expressions of your inner beauty. God bless you!
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Date: 7/5/2020 4:08:00 PM
Glad you loved my muse Gina! Thank you for your uplifting words and for my placement in your contest. Blessings and love :)
Date: 7/5/2020 11:34:00 AM
Truly a touching remembrance an as my kids would say "Sweet."
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Date: 7/5/2020 4:07:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and kind words :)
Date: 7/2/2020 10:07:00 PM
What a beautiful tribute to your grandpa with such loving memories. I imagine your grandpa is smiling down on you, Aditi. Blessings to you, Rhonda xx
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Date: 7/4/2020 2:28:00 PM
Thank you for your loving words Rhonda. I'd like to believe he is smiling at me. Blessings and love :)
Date: 7/2/2020 6:22:00 AM
what a beautiful memory of your grandfather, it made me think of mine, though ours were pear and apple trees, but I can still picture him getting the pears off the tree for me...I cannot eat a store bought pear to this day.... how I miss those times... thanks for helping my memory come to surface through your beautiful write... best wishes in the contest!
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Date: 7/4/2020 2:28:00 PM
I am glad my words brought back beautiful memories for you Sandra. I miss those days too. Thank you for such kind words. Blessings and love :)
Date: 7/2/2020 2:59:00 AM
Grandpa is no doubt reading this one from his comfortable seat in heaven.
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Date: 7/4/2020 2:26:00 PM
Thank you for such soothing words Caren. Lots of love :)
Date: 7/2/2020 2:53:00 AM
Your grandpa would be so proud of who you have become, and would be teary eyed to know all the traits of his you have so poetically preserved. I particularly was attracted to the musical connection you shared with him. "His symphony / dancing on flute echoing folk songs in my memory". The mango tree makes a wonderful totem for your poem. Loved it all, a fave for me, best wishes in the contest, my dear friend ~ John
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Date: 7/4/2020 2:26:00 PM
I am really overwhelmed with your insightful response my friend. Thank you for such honest and soothing words of appreciation. I too wish he is happy watching me. God bless you. :)
Date: 7/1/2020 10:40:00 PM
this one deserves a very high placement. I wish I could think up a free verse like this for anyone of my departed loved ones!
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Date: 7/4/2020 2:25:00 PM
Thank you for your kind appreciation Andrea! I am sure you will pen wonderful verses with your pen. You are a talented poetess :) Blessings and love
Date: 7/1/2020 6:51:00 PM
Such a fitting choice of a subject -- a fruit tree -- for this outstanding tribute to your grandfather. May the fruits borne of this tree nourish your soul for years to come! Preciously penned, Aditi! Take care, Gershon
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Date: 7/4/2020 2:24:00 PM
I am really thankful for your uplifting words Gershon. Thank you for such kind words. God bless you :)
Date: 7/1/2020 3:27:00 AM
Oh, what a great legacy your grandpa left! Grandfathers will always occupy a very special place in our hearts! This is more than wonderful dear Aditi. An instant FAVE!
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Date: 7/1/2020 7:58:00 AM
Indeed, that's why we miss them! Thank you for the fave and for your loving appreciation. Blessings and love :)
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