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A prayer for all my grand-children but, for Mali in particular she is in the process of having a bone marrow transplant and needs all our prayers.




Please follow Mali's progress at: http://www.caringbridge.org/visit/mali
My youngest grand-baby needs your prayers. Thank you

Believe in God's Heaven, your wishes will soar, to be heard by family inside heaven's door. Tell grandpa and grandma, my daughter, your son of raising your children in the Florida sun. The Great Spirit will listen, to the words that you speak and judge from your heart, if your spirit is weak. He will fill heart and spirit to carry the fight, through the darkness ahead, trust in the light For peace in the darkness, speak with your friends, know wisdom and guidance, will be what he sends Not fearing the darkness, enter it strong praying his answer will come with a song. Your wishes will soar to the heavens above, through family and friends about the one that you love. I'm not a prophet, seer or fool, just a man who lives by this earthly rule . Children are treasures, as I speak to the sky that they should enjoy life, long after I die. If wishes were horses, beggars would ride When prayers are answered, your children will thrive.
For "Compose A Prayer" contest

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Date: 7/18/2012 5:46:00 PM
Congrad's on your fine verse doing so well, Light & Love
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Tom Larrow
Date: 7/19/2012 6:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, I value your opinion.
Date: 7/18/2012 8:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Tom. Love, Carol
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Tom Larrow
Date: 7/19/2012 6:46:00 PM
Thank you, I am overjoyed that it was recognized
Date: 7/4/2012 2:09:00 AM
LOVE!
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Date: 2/11/2012 6:19:00 AM
Wowser please do write and tell me how you got the art to insert in the body of the post? HELP Light & Love Debbie
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Date: 11/10/2011 1:48:00 PM
Tom, well done with this poem. Congratulations. Tony
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Date: 11/9/2011 7:19:00 AM
Great poetic meter Tom as well as a lovely prayer. Congratulations
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Tom Larrow
Date: 11/9/2011 9:08:00 AM
I am grateful for the encouragement, enjoy writing stories of life, with my words. Have a great day!
Date: 11/9/2011 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "Compose A Prayer"contest Tom. Love, Carol
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Tom Larrow
Date: 11/9/2011 9:08:00 AM
I am grateful for the encouragement, enjoy writing stories of life, with my words. Have a great day!
Date: 11/4/2011 2:24:00 PM
very inspiring...... your piece is one of a kind. ..Love Jesus so i would definitely love this one...nice work
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Tom Larrow
Date: 11/7/2011 10:37:00 PM
Thank you for the encouragement, enjoy writing Have a great day!