Grandpa

storm clouds billow west
weather vane creaks north to east…
left knee aches a bit
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Goff Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 12:55 AM
Know how it feels! jimbo
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 11:03 PM
oh YES, I heard about this kind of thing. Poor grandpa. This is really great senryu.
Nance Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 3:13 PM
Who needs a meterologist, when one can just listen to the body aches to claim the weather :)
Makama Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 10:13 AM
I had a fantastic read. I will really love to read more of your work....
Guzzi Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 7:40 AM
So nice to read your writing this morning. Light & Love
Meade Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 8:16 PM
Wonderful -- I love a poem that has a great finish . . . this did not disappoint. Well done my friend.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 6:51 PM
You know you're old when your body is the weather man.
Allison Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 4:33 PM
Gosh can relate to this one with my elderly parents - great insightful write:-) hugs jan xxx
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 6:49 PM
Gosh I can relate to this myself.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace