Grandpa

storm clouds billow west weather vane creaks north to east… left knee aches a bit

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/14/2014 12:55:00 AM

Know how it feels! jimbo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2014 11:03:00 PM

oh YES, I heard about this kind of thing. Poor grandpa. This is really great senryu.

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/1/2014 3:13:00 PM

Who needs a meterologist, when one can just listen to the body aches to claim the weather :)

Funom Makama

Date: 12/1/2014 10:13:00 AM

I had a fantastic read. I will really love to read more of your work....

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/1/2014 7:40:00 AM

So nice to read your writing this morning. Light & Love

David Meade

Date: 11/30/2014 8:16:00 PM

Wonderful -- I love a poem that has a great finish . . . this did not disappoint. Well done my friend.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/30/2014 6:51:00 PM

You know you're old when your body is the weather man.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/30/2014 4:33:00 PM

Gosh can relate to this one with my elderly parents - great insightful write:-) hugs jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/30/2014 6:49:00 PM

Gosh I can relate to this myself.