Grandmother-Ifl Contest

I watched her slip under;
The influence of death laid her still.
She would be gone forever,
I felt the grief hit.

We would no longer create delicious cookies;
Sew our first project;
Crochet our first scarf or blanket;
Never hold each other in hugs made of 4 cold hands.

Taken by time;
By age;
By death.
It hurts me in ways I've never felt.

And as I sit over her grave;
Mourning the loss of a grandmother.
I realize she would mourn me,
The loss of her granddaughter.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2023 at 6:52 AM
- A lovely and moving poem, Sofia - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs
Messina Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 4:07 AM
So touching, Sofia. Sorry for the loss of your grandmother, dear friend. Great writing...keep it up :) Congrats on your win in my contest. Charlie
Alex Avatar
February 20, 2023 at 8:34 PM
"It hurts me in ways I've never felt" - indeed, the horrible feeling of the departure of loved ones. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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