Grandfather S Clock

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~ Grandfather's Clock ~
 
My old grandfather had a clock
It wasn’t a grandfather clock
A clock it was that went tick tock
It sent me mad grandfather’s clock
Till once I hit it with a wok
But it was steady as a rock
And then it laughed and said cuckoo
A little bird went out and in 
It said cuckoo bee bow and boo
Then I took aim and threw my shoe
It ran in fast and closed the door
Of old grandfather’s cuckoo clock
I had enough of all its cheek
I had it planned to glue its beak
So then I sat on wooden floor
And waited there, looked at the clock
Grandfather’s clock that went tick tock 
I sat there long and fell asleep
Then I woke up and had a peep
Grandfather’s clock was under shock
It was tongue tied, not one tick tock
It hung in silence on the wall
There were no echoes in the hall
How strange it felt now that the clock
Had lost its voice, no tick no tock
The little bird made not a sound
No sortie out, no bee no boo
I missed that tiny red cuckoo.
Like a spoilt brat I'd moaned and whined
The way I acted was unkind!
Then I sat down, felt bad inside
I was ashamed. I cried and cried!

As my tears fell I heard tick tock
The friendly sound of grandpa's clock
To cap it all the red bird flew
out of the door and said cuckoo!

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Contest: Childrens Story, Dr. Seuss Style
Sponsor: Casarah Nance aided by Abigail

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 9/3/2015 12:52:00 PM
the ending was as sweet as sweet could be, a lovely story, good luck in the contest:)
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Paul Callus
Date: 9/3/2015 1:10:00 PM
I'm pleased that you liked it, Linda. Unfortunately this failed to make it to the winners' list, but I enjoyed writing it. Thank you for stopping by:) hugs // paul
Date: 9/2/2015 1:47:00 PM
What a delightful read! I'm surprised this is not in the winners' list. hugs!
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Date: 9/2/2015 3:45:00 PM
Hi Kim! I still have to read most of the winning entries, but I am sure that there must have been a very good selection. Thank you for finding it delightful:) Hugs // paul
Date: 8/30/2015 11:24:00 AM
A delightful surprise. Love kid poems. Love, daver
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Date: 9/1/2015 3:26:00 PM
Thank you Dave. Glad you have been pleasantly surprised:) All the best. // paul
Date: 8/30/2015 1:51:00 AM
Paul, Paul.. PAuuuuuuuuuuuul!! hahaha I so like this poem and so like the pic.. :P!! I remember the cartoon movies I watched with such!!! cute and made me smile really!!!! ~Olive Eloisa =') hugs!!!
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Date: 9/1/2015 3:25:00 PM
Thank you for reading and liking, Olive_eloi:) My g'daughter Valentina enjoyed it, too! She could relate to it since we have a cuckoo clock at home. Hugs // paul
Date: 8/23/2015 9:11:00 PM
I so so love this. I am so entertained and adding it to my fvs.: )Cukoo !!!
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Date: 8/24/2015 9:17:00 AM
Thank you for reading and enjoying, Charm! I've always found cuckoo clock fascinating. My father mended clocks as a hobby, and at times we had several cuckoo clocks in the house going at it on the hr and half hr!. ~ Have a lovely week! // paul
Date: 8/23/2015 4:20:00 PM
Very charming and I love the impishness in the grandson.
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Date: 8/23/2015 5:22:00 PM
Thank you, Mary! The word 'impishness' aptly describes what I had in mind! ~ All the best. // paul
Date: 8/23/2015 1:57:00 PM
This is so charming and adorable Paul. I love your heartwarming ending! I know this will be a winner! Big 7
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Date: 8/23/2015 2:57:00 PM
Thank you Connie! I love writing for children, in fact I've got loads of short stories, songs and poems which I wrote during my teaching days. ~ Take care! Hugs // paul
Date: 8/23/2015 2:27:00 AM
Brilliant!!, i've read a few for this contest now and i have to say the sponsor will be finding it hard to pick, so good luck Paul it would be very deserving of a winners pin. Warm regards, Laura.
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Date: 8/23/2015 1:08:00 PM
Your lovely and encouraging feed back is truly appreciated, Laura. Thank you! Warm regards ~~~ paul
Date: 8/22/2015 10:32:00 PM
Well I thank you fer the wonderful conclude of that write dear poet ! Loved it! TY for the congrats recently...have a wonderful week sir...much love, james
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Date: 8/23/2015 1:06:00 PM
Thank you Sir! Honoured by your visit and the positive remarks. All the best to you! // paul
Date: 8/21/2015 9:39:00 PM
this is great story telling about that cuckoo clock!! VEry nicely done for the contest. OH MY, I gotta hurry and try something!!
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Date: 8/22/2015 7:17:00 AM
Already twice I missed out on Casarah's contests due to idleness or negligence; this time I took no chances! ~ have changed the last part since you commented. // paul
Date: 8/21/2015 3:57:00 PM
the tonality of this piece is delightful, paul.. i feel like a child again tick-tocking away.. huggs
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Date: 8/22/2015 7:14:00 AM
Thank you for reading and liking, Nette! Hope Cas and Abby like it, too. Hugs // paul
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