Grandfather Moon

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How fitting that a full moon would be the setting of my husband’s homecoming.

GRANDFATHER MOON grandfather moon proud glorious rounded shoulders sing-along brightness whistles grandly through the leafless oaks reunited, a couple kisses under the voracious hug of lunar light, two crescents joined together as one 12/23/2018

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/23/2018 8:44:00 PM

A beautiful way to think of the full moon Kim! I loved it! Happy Holidays! ; ) xxoo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/23/2018 10:03:00 PM

Thank you, Connie! <3 Happy Holidays!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/23/2018 5:19:00 PM

Sigh! "Two crescents joined as one." So romantic. Well-done! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/23/2018 7:02:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon! Happy Holidays!