Grandeur

Glimpse grandeur gaze Meet mindful maze Wise wit wanders Words work wonder Seek splendour sweet Meek moments meet Sign sanguine strains Prompt pleasure paints Such sensuous sighs Hurl happy highs Now nowhere near Craft clever cheer Start subtle sketch Profound poise patch Set simple surge Use unzips urge Leon Enriquez 05 November 2017 Singapore

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David Smith

Date: 11/6/2017 9:13:00 PM

This one works for me. Glad you kept it positive while still rhyming. Glad I stopped by. Best regards David In NZ

Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/7/2017 6:42:00 PM

Dear David: Glad to hear from you my friend. Thank you for your kind words. Trust you are living fine. All the best then, Leon.

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 11/6/2017 7:17:00 AM

Great use of words and rhyme, really enjoy the last stanza. Well penned.

Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/7/2017 6:43:00 PM

Dear Scott: Thank you for your kind words. Glad this poem delighted you my friend. All the best then, Leon.