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Grandeur

Glimpse grandeur gaze
Meet mindful maze


Wise wit wanders
Words work wonder


Seek splendour sweet
Meek moments meet


Sign sanguine strains
Prompt pleasure paints


Such sensuous sighs
Hurl happy highs


Now nowhere near
Craft clever cheer


Start subtle sketch
Profound poise patch


Set simple surge
Use unzips urge




Leon Enriquez
05 November 2017
Singapore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/6/2017 9:13:00 PM
This one works for me. Glad you kept it positive while still rhyming. Glad I stopped by. Best regards David In NZ
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/7/2017 6:42:00 PM
Dear David: Glad to hear from you my friend. Thank you for your kind words. Trust you are living fine. All the best then, Leon.
Date: 11/6/2017 7:17:00 AM
Great use of words and rhyme, really enjoy the last stanza. Well penned.
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Leon Enriquez
Date: 11/7/2017 6:43:00 PM
Dear Scott: Thank you for your kind words. Glad this poem delighted you my friend. All the best then, Leon.

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