Grandchildren






One day I pray to meet
My children's children, with my mother's blue eyed glee
Seeing me

My deepest wish
Blessed to see my progeny
Love rich

My child
Hope to see ye
Smile

One day I pray to meet
Blessed to see my progeny
Smile

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Alesia Leach

October 6, 2024 at 12:39 PM

Ooh, wonderfully penned. Can't wait to meet mine, too.

Arlo Parker

October 1, 2024 at 12:16 PM

Indeed, grandchildren carry eyes of long known parentage, heredity snapshots. May your wish come true in sparkling ways. As Tom always says, kewl. :o))

Crystol Woods

October 4, 2024 at 10:25 AM

Awe thanks Arlo! Kewl... Tom is fun and inspires imitation huh!? You're both a joy to hear from! Xo

Hiya Sharma

October 1, 2024 at 12:47 AM

Oh wowww, this is such an incredibly crafted minichu poem with a glorious touch of wishes which speak of being able to witness every essence of time..How beautiful it would be to feel caressed by our mother angels whilst also being that fairy for another lil soul who has blossomed from our heart ~ and this ancestral beauty or the pattern of love continues and blessed are those who get to experience this, truly. Wonderfully crafted piece, dear poetess. Best of luck for the contest, sending light!

Crystol Woods

October 1, 2024 at 1:17 AM

Thank you so much Hiya! I'm so grateful you took time to comment on this with such positivity! Made my day! Xoxo