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Minichu on fulfillment contest

Form:

Line, Rhyme scheme, syllable count

1. A. 6

2. B. 12

3. A. 3

4. C. 4

5. B. 8

6. C. 2

7. D. 2

8. B. 4

9. D. 1

10. Repeat line 1 (A. 6)

11. Repeat line 5 (B. 8)

12. Repeat line 9 (D. 1)

Theme: Fulfillment

Sponsor: Mohan Chutani

One day I pray to meet My children's children, with my mother's blue eyed glee Seeing me My deepest wish Blessed to see my progeny Love rich My child Hope to see ye Smile One day I pray to meet Blessed to see my progeny Smile

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Alesia Leach

Date: 10/6/2024 12:39:00 PM

Ooh, wonderfully penned. Can't wait to meet mine, too.

Arlo Parker

Date: 10/1/2024 12:16:00 PM

Indeed, grandchildren carry eyes of long known parentage, heredity snapshots. May your wish come true in sparkling ways. As Tom always says, kewl. :o))

Crystol Woods
Date: 10/4/2024 10:25:00 AM

Awe thanks Arlo! Kewl... Tom is fun and inspires imitation huh!? You're both a joy to hear from! Xo

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/1/2024 12:47:00 AM

Oh wowww, this is such an incredibly crafted minichu poem with a glorious touch of wishes which speak of being able to witness every essence of time..How beautiful it would be to feel caressed by our mother angels whilst also being that fairy for another lil soul who has blossomed from our heart ~ and this ancestral beauty or the pattern of love continues and blessed are those who get to experience this, truly. Wonderfully crafted piece, dear poetess. Best of luck for the contest, sending light!

Crystol Woods
Date: 10/1/2024 1:17:00 AM

Thank you so much Hiya! I'm so grateful you took time to comment on this with such positivity! Made my day! Xoxo

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/30/2024 2:40:00 PM

love the sentimental value of this artword, crystol...the long line of ancestry is our only gift to eternity... great job!

Crystol Woods
Date: 10/1/2024 1:18:00 AM

Thanks Nette my friend! That's high praise from a poet I admire so. Xo

Tom Woody

Date: 9/30/2024 11:32:00 AM

Every parent's wish, to be on hand to witness future generations. I've never met my grandchildren. King, sad story. Anyway, here's hoping you have a gazillion

Tom Woody
Date: 9/30/2024 1:36:00 PM

Lol sorry I never know how the text is going to come out. It was meant to read: Long, sad story

Crystol Woods
Date: 9/30/2024 11:36:00 AM

Your grand child's name is King? I hate to hear that you've never met... how sad. I won't tell my daughter your hope for a gazillion lol! I remember when I was her age(17)I couldn't wait to get married and have children! She's not like me... she doesn't want to have kids, now or ever! I pray she changes her mind because she's my only living child. Ty for popping in today! Xo