Grand Design

I feel like I’m floating
Through a cloud of gas particle
Deluxe.
Electric orbits playing catch,
While silently I contemplate such theoretical 
Existence.
Energy flowing like a circle in symmetry;
A silent entropic increase bends all
Meaning.
Orbit pulling influences go unnoticed;
Subliminal linearity continues to delude us 
Unnoted.
I feel pulled and stretched in quantum time,
But relativity does not roll
Dice.
A strong and weak fusion controls our elation,
While the unconscious nuclear pilgrims’ continue on in
Patience.
Determined existence yet muonically random;
What a strange “grand design” we live in,
          Yet…
    Orbits on 
Unnoted.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 18, 2011 at 12:02 PM
I am spending my morning reading wonderful poetry and enjoying it so much. I am so impressed with the poems I have read so far this morning. I am happy yours was among them Adam. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol
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