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Grand Canyon Smiles

< How! I come to this place often to hear my grandfather speak wisdom in the wind even under swollen moon they say you can see his spirit rise high above canyons ridge telling a tale of sightfullness Oh tell me great eagle that soars why did he have to die now I feel like that of the caged crow with wings that have been clipped but I will live for another sun to rise to touch that of an doves feather Entry For P.D Contest G.L. All Chosen Form Dramatic Monoloque Written 6/19/11

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Date: 7/14/2011 8:33:00 PM
This was wonderful how you faced the challenge. Congrats on your awesome result. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/12/2011 11:31:00 AM
Katherine, I have never tried this form, but the story you told through your brilliant descriptions touched my heart. The Grand Canyon is such a beautiful place to visit. Love the line describing how the great eagle's wings had been clipped. Hope you have found your dove now. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/12/2011 5:14:00 AM
Congrats Katherine on your exciting win with this dazzling assignment my friend.. an amazing challenge u met luv.. enjoy kudos now..wow..
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Date: 7/12/2011 5:11:00 AM
Congratulations Katherine on your win in the "Assignment" contest of P.D. Love, Carol P.S. Congratulations on your published poetry my friend.
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Date: 7/12/2011 4:15:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., katherine
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Date: 7/12/2011 12:54:00 AM
swinging cheers to you for the amazing award,katherine!! :) huggs
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Date: 7/12/2011 12:47:00 AM
,Congratulations on a poem well done! Thank you for supporting my contest~ I sure enjoyed every entry,..p.d.
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Date: 6/19/2011 10:06:00 AM
good luck with this write in the contest! What part of Orlando are you talking about? I lived there for 5 years and many of my family still live there. I'm glad you like the redneck poem. I live in S.Cacalack now! So I know, Trust me I KNOW all about that kinda TAWWWLk!
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Date: 6/19/2011 9:28:00 AM
Thanks for the comment and Happy father's Day, katherine
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Date: 6/19/2011 7:32:00 AM
Nice dedication on this day to the grandfather, Katherine
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