Grand Canyon Smiles

<                            How!
               I come to this place often
               to hear my grandfather speak wisdom in the wind
               even under swollen moon they say you can see his spirit rise
               high above canyons ridge
               telling a tale of sightfullness
               Oh tell me great eagle that soars
               why did he have to die
               now I feel like that of the caged crow
               with wings that have been clipped
               but I will live for another sun to rise
               to touch that of an doves feather




Entry For P.D Contest
G.L. All

Chosen Form
Dramatic Monoloque

Written 6/19/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

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Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 8:33 PM
This was wonderful how you faced the challenge. Congrats on your awesome result. LUv, Andrea
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July 12, 2011 at 11:31 AM
Katherine, I have never tried this form, but the story you told through your brilliant descriptions touched my heart. The Grand Canyon is such a beautiful place to visit. Love the line describing how the great eagle's wings had been clipped. Hope you have found your dove now. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 5:14 AM
Congrats Katherine on your exciting win with this dazzling assignment my friend.. an amazing challenge u met luv.. enjoy kudos now..wow..
Brown Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 5:11 AM
Congratulations Katherine on your win in the "Assignment" contest of P.D. Love, Carol P.S. Congratulations on your published poetry my friend.
Mehta Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 4:15 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., katherine
Onclaud Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 12:54 AM
swinging cheers to you for the amazing award,katherine!! :) huggs
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July 12, 2011 at 12:47 AM
,Congratulations on a poem well done! Thank you for supporting my contest~ I sure enjoyed every entry,..p.d.
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June 19, 2011 at 10:06 AM
good luck with this write in the contest! What part of Orlando are you talking about? I lived there for 5 years and many of my family still live there. I'm glad you like the redneck poem. I live in S.Cacalack now! So I know, Trust me I KNOW all about that kinda TAWWWLk!
Mehta Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 9:28 AM
Thanks for the comment and Happy father's Day, katherine
Mehta Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 7:32 AM
Nice dedication on this day to the grandfather, Katherine
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